List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam belirsizlikleri var. Daha doğal ve akıcı cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, cevabınızı doğrudan soruya yanıtlayıp, ardından destekleyici detaylar ekleyin. Örneğin, neden liste yapmayı tercih ettiğinizi açıklayın ve gereksiz tekrarları azaltın.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go out. It helps me remember what I need and avoid buying unnecessary things. For example, last week I saved money by sticking to my list.

제안: Cümleniz anlam açısından karışık ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. Cevabınızı daha açık ve mantıklı bir şekilde yapılandırın. Ayrıca, bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlelerinizin akıcılığını artırabilirsiniz.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. When I list my tasks, I can focus better and complete them efficiently.

제안: Cevabınızda anlam belirsizliği ve dilbilgisi sorunları var. Daha net ve mantıklı cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, neden bazı insanların liste yapmayı sevmediğine dair daha spesifik nedenler verin ve düşüncelerinizi açıkça ifade edin.

예시: Some people may dislike making lists because they prefer to keep things in their mind. They might find writing lists unnecessary or time-consuming.

제안: Cevabınızda tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları mevcut. Cevabınızı daha düzenli ve anlaşılır hale getirin. Tercihinizi açıkça belirtin ve nedenlerini mantıklı bir şekilde açıklayın.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and always with me. For example, I can easily add or remove items whenever I want.

× Of course I always had a list when I'm going out or I'm going to shop or maybe I'll imagine buying something.

✓ Of course I always have a list when I go out or I am going shopping or maybe I imagine buying something.

The sentence mixes past tense 'had' with present and future tenses. Since the context is habitual action, present tense 'have' and 'go' should be used for consistency.

× I always made a wish list or A to do list always in my page is here because I want to do my things with approach.

✓ I always make a wish list or a to-do list on my page here because I want to do my things with an approach.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. Also, 'made' should be 'make' to match present habitual action. The phrase 'in my page is here' is awkward and corrected to 'on my page here'.

× Yes, I always do make a list for my work because it makes me more safe saving.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me save more safely.

The phrase 'makes me more safe saving' is incorrect. 'Helps me save more safely' correctly uses modal verb structure and adverb placement.

× And it's work actually because when you do something list it, it's like organizing.

✓ And it actually works because when you make a list of something, it's like organizing.

'It's work' should be 'it works' to indicate the function. Also, 'do something list it' is incorrect; 'make a list of something' is the correct expression.

× It makes ourselves maybe so maybe more than the complicated I think.

✓ It makes things maybe less complicated, I think.

'Ourselves' is incorrectly used here; the sentence is unclear and corrected to express the intended meaning clearly without incorrect pronouns.

× maybe they don't like writing something on their phone or their page and maybe they don't like the organizing life.

✓ Maybe they don't like writing something on their phone or their page, and maybe they don't like organizing life.

The phrase 'the organizing life' is awkward; removing 'the' and adjusting the phrase improves clarity.

× Like maybe some people like the everything's right and some people like doing on their mind because it's change for people than people.

✓ Maybe some people like everything to be right, and some people like doing things in their mind because it's different for different people.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun references and awkward phrasing; corrected for clarity and proper pronoun use.

× I think people have to do this every people for me.

✓ I think everyone has to do this, at least for me.

'Every people' is incorrect; 'everyone' is the correct pronoun. The sentence is rephrased for clarity.

× Yeah, on my phone, in notebook, in notebook like I always do to the list, I just page.

✓ Yeah, on my phone or in a notebook, I always make a list; I just use a page.

Prepositions 'in notebook' should be 'in a notebook'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct preposition use.

× It's very well and it makes me more comfortable maybe because it's here and when I buy it or when I do it, I can take on it.

✓ It works very well and makes me more comfortable, maybe because it's here, and when I buy something or do it, I can refer to it.

Pronouns and phrases like 'take on it' are incorrect; corrected to proper expressions for clarity.

× It's makes me feel good and wanted to do it this.

✓ It makes me feel good and want to do it.

'It's makes' is incorrect; should be 'It makes'. 'Wanted' should be 'want' to match present tense. 'Do it this' is awkward and removed.