List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答较为自然，但有些表达不够准确，如“put on the list on my phone”应改为“make a list on my phone”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复“well”，并使用更准确的词汇。

예시: It depends on where I shop. If I go to a supermarket, I usually make a list on my phone using a memo app to remember what to buy. However, if I visit a department store, I don't usually make a list.

제안: 回答中有较多语气词“umm”“uh”，影响流畅度。部分表达不够准确，如“the importances”应为“important tasks”。建议减少语气词，使用更准确的词汇，并注意句子连贯。

예시: Yes, definitely. I like to plan my work schedule because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important tasks. I believe making a list is a great way to stay focused on my projects.

제안: 回答较为自然，但“making this”表达不清晰，建议改为“making lists”。可以增加更多具体原因，使内容更丰富。

예시: Some people might find making lists too complicated or time-consuming. Also, they may prefer to live in the moment and handle things spontaneously without planning ahead.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，如“that laptops”应为“laptop”，重复“my my”。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，并使句子更简洁流畅。

예시: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone or sometimes on my laptop because it allows me to check my calendar easily and organize things digitally. I often use the memo app on my phone to keep track of my plans.

× I won't forget, umm, the importances that I need to do.

✓ I won't forget, umm, the important things that I need to do.

“importances”不是可数名词，不能用复数形式。应使用“important things”来表达“重要的事情”。

× Well it depends.

✓ Well, it depends.

“Well”作为插入语后面应加逗号，表示停顿，使句子更通顺。

× If I'm going to a supermarket then I will put on the list on my phone in the app like memo app to make sure I remember what to buy.

✓ If I'm going to a supermarket then I will put it on the list on my phone in an app like the memo app to make sure I remember what to buy.

“put on the list”缺少宾语，应补充“it”；“in the app like memo app”中“in”用法不当，改为“in an app like the memo app”更准确。

× Well, definitely on my phone or sometimes that laptops umm it allows me to check my calendar easier and organize since digitally.

✓ Well, definitely on my phone or sometimes on laptops. Umm, it allows me to check my calendar more easily and organize things digitally.

“sometimes that laptops”中“that”用错，应去掉；“check my calendar easier”中“easier”应使用副词形式“more easily”；“organize since digitally”表达不清，改为“organize things digitally”。

× So I sometimes use the memo app on my phone to keep track of my my plan.

✓ So I sometimes use the memo app on my phone to keep track of my plan.

“my my”重复，应去掉一个“my”。