List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，有语法错误和重复表达。建议简化句子结构，避免口语填充词，并使用更准确的表达。

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need to buy.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子结构混乱。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并用连接词使句子连贯。

예시: Yes, I often make lists at work, especially during busy periods, because they help me organize my tasks and remember important things.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，且内容不够具体。建议清晰表达观点，避免语法错误，并提供具体例子支持观点。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom and creativity. For example, they prefer to solve problems flexibly rather than following a fixed plan.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但语言稍显简单且有语法错误。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient than paper, and I can easily edit the list whenever I need to.

× Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I think it's really a great way to remind me don't forget, uh, something I want to buy.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I think it's really a great way to remind me not to forget something I want to buy.

这里“remind me don't forget”结构不正确，动词“remind”后应接动词不定式“not to forget”，表示提醒不要忘记。应使用动词不定式形式。

× Yes, I often make a list for my work especially in some busy time and event is really a a fantastic way to help me. Organize my scenes, especially some important things.

✓ Yes, I often make a list for my work, especially in busy times, and it is really a fantastic way to help me organize my scenes, especially some important things.

“some busy time and event”中“time”和“event”应使用复数形式“times”和“events”，且缺少连接词和主语，句子结构不完整。需要加逗号和主语“it”，并将“Organize”改为小写，合并为一句完整句子。

× Well, I guess the main reason that some people dislike me making lists, he said.

✓ Well, I guess the main reason that some people dislike making lists.

“dislike me making lists”中“me”使用错误，动词“dislike”后直接接动名词“making lists”即可，不需要宾格代词“me”。另外“he said”与上下文不符，应删除。

× They think this way will limit their freedom and creativity.

✓ They think this way limits their freedom and creativity.

主语“this way”是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“limits”，而不是“will limit”，这里更符合一般现在时表达习惯。

× For example, when they face some problems they prefer, like choosing a flexible.

✓ For example, when they face some problems, they prefer to choose flexibly.

“prefer, like choosing a flexible”结构不完整且“flexible”用法错误，应改为“prefer to choose flexibly”，使用动词不定式和副词形式。

× Well, for me, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it's more convenient than writing on paper and I can change it flexible.

✓ Well, for me, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it's more convenient than writing on paper and I can change it flexibly.

“change it flexible”中“flexible”应为副词形式“flexibly”，表示“灵活地改变”。