List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“make least”应为“make a list”，“when I'm shop”应为“when I shop”。建议注意基本语法结构，避免重复表达，如“rely on more rely on”应简化。此外，回答可以更简洁自然，避免冗余。

예시: Actually, I prefer shopping spontaneously, so I don't usually make a list when I shop. Sometimes, I just hang out with my friends and buy whatever catches my eye. I also often take advantage of promotions and discounts.

제안: 回答结构较好，但存在语法错误，如“it's significantly improve”应为“it significantly improves”。建议注意主谓一致和时态的正确使用，同时可以使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work. When I check everything off my list, I feel a great sense of achievement. Moreover, it significantly improves my productivity.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“don't have the good understanding”应为“don't have a good understanding”，“feel a little bit off”表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和表达，避免模糊和不完整的句子。

예시: One reason might be that some people don't understand how to make or use lists effectively, so they feel uncomfortable doing so. Another reason is that seeing a long list can make people feel stressed or overwhelmed.

제안: 回答表达基本清晰，但存在语法错误，如“I prefer make a list”应为“I prefer to make a list”。此外，口语中“right?”使用不当，建议避免使用口语填充词。可以使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more flexible. I can easily add or delete items whenever I need, and it's less likely to get lost, which makes it very convenient.

× Actually I prefer shopping spontaneously so I don't make least when I'm shop.

✓ Actually I prefer shopping spontaneously so I don't make lists when I shop.

least 应为 lists，表示购物清单，复数形式。

× Actually I prefer shopping spontaneously so I don't make least when I'm shop.

✓ Actually I prefer shopping spontaneously so I don't make lists when I shop.

'I'm shop' 应为 'I shop'，动词前不需要助动词，保持一般现在时。

× Sometimes I just hang out with my friend and see what catches my eyes and sometimes I even rely on more rely on the promotion and discounts.

✓ Sometimes I just hang out with my friends and see what catches my eye and sometimes I even rely more on the promotions and discounts.

friend 应为 friends，复数形式；eyes 应为 eye，习惯用法是 'catch my eye'；promotion 和 discounts 应为复数形式 promotions 和 discounts。

× Sometimes I just hang out with my friend and see what catches my eyes and sometimes I even rely on more rely on the promotion and discounts.

✓ Sometimes I just hang out with my friends and see what catches my eye and sometimes I even rely more on the promotions and discounts.

'rely on more rely on' 结构重复，应改为 'rely more on'。

× And yes, it's significantly improve my productivity.

✓ And yes, it significantly improves my productivity.

主语 it 是第三人称单数，动词应加 -s 变为 improves；significantly 是副词，修饰动词。

× One reason that I could think of is they don't have the good understanding of how to make lists and how to use list.

✓ One reason that I can think of is they don't have a good understanding of how to make lists and how to use lists.

good 前应加冠词 a；use list 应为 use lists，保持复数一致。

× So if they need to do so they will feel a little bit off.

✓ So if they need to do so, they will feel a little bit off.

句中缺少逗号，连接条件状语从句。

× And another reason that I could think of is many people may feel stressed off when they see.

✓ And another reason that I can think of is many people may feel stressed when they see it.

feel stressed off 结构错误，应为 feel stressed；句尾缺少宾语 it。

× I prefer make a list on my phone because it's more flexible, right?

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more flexible, right?

prefer 后应接不定式 to make，而非直接动词原形。