List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为直接，但表达稍显重复，且缺少连接词使句子流畅。建议减少重复，使用连接词使表达更自然。

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what to buy, which is very important.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的时态和句式，并用连接词使内容连贯。

예시: Yes, I make lists for work, especially during busy periods. For example, I list my classes and exams, which makes managing my schedule much easier.

제안: 回答不够清晰，语法和词汇使用错误较多，影响理解。建议简化句子结构，使用准确词汇表达观点。

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to do things spontaneously rather than following a plan.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，影响理解。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，并清楚表达理由。

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because I can physically check off completed tasks, which feels more satisfying and simple.

× I always make a list when I shop because the list can remind me of the things I will buy and I think it's very crucial.

✓ I always make a list when I shop because the list can remind me about the things I will buy and I think it's very crucial.

这里“remind”后面应该用介词“about”来表示提醒的内容，而不是“of”。

× Yes, I will make a list when I work and it does work.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I work and it does work.

这里描述习惯动作，应该用一般现在时而不是将来时“will”。

× Like when I had a busy schedule, I will make a list to list the things, the class, the examinations I will do so it's very convenient.

✓ Like when I have a busy schedule, I make a list of the things, the classes, the examinations I have to do, so it's very convenient.

这里描述习惯动作，时态应为一般现在时；“list the things”应改为“list of the things”；“class”应为复数“classes”；“I will do”应改为“I have to do”。

× Oh, I think they may consider making these races and many time they may do things what they think instead of making a list.

✓ Oh, I think they may consider making these tasks and many times they may do things what they think instead of making a list.

“races”应为“tasks”更符合语境；“many time”应为复数“many times”。

× many time they may do things what they think instead of making a list.

✓ many times they may do things that they think instead of making a list.

“what”用法错误，应改为关系代词“that”引导定语从句。

× Oh, I prefer to make a list on paper because I think I can write it down and when I finish the things I can just just. Sick on it and it's a simple of that, I think.

✓ Oh, I prefer to make a list on paper because I think I can write it down and when I finish the things I can just tick on it and it's a simple thing like that, I think.

“just just. Sick on it”是拼写错误，应为“just tick on it”；“a simple of that”应为“a simple thing like that”。