List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Twoja odpowiedź jest naturalna, ale zawiera powtórzenia i drobne błędy gramatyczne. Staraj się unikać powtarzania tych samych słów i używaj pełnych zdań. Dodaj łączniki, aby odpowiedź była bardziej spójna.

예시: Yes, I am a very organized person, so I always prepare a shopping list before I go to the store. This helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

제안: Twoja odpowiedź jest dobra, ale możesz poprawić płynność i uniknąć powtórzeń. Użyj łączników, aby lepiej połączyć zdania i dodaj bardziej szczegółowe informacje.

예시: Yes, I make a daily task list to organize my work. By planning in advance, I can manage my time efficiently and focus on achieving specific goals each hour.

제안: Twoja odpowiedź jest zbyt długa i zawiera powtórzenia oraz błędy gramatyczne. Staraj się mówić krócej i bardziej precyzyjnie, używając łączników, aby odpowiedź była spójna.

예시: Some people prefer to be spontaneous and go with the flow. For example, they might find making lists stressful and enjoy handling things as they come.

제안: Twoja odpowiedź jest naturalna, ale kończy się nagle i jest trochę chaotyczna. Staraj się kończyć zdania i używać łączników, aby odpowiedź była pełna i logiczna.

예시: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me. This way, I can easily update my list anytime and never forget it at home.

× Yeah, I very, I'm very organized person and I like to have prepared what I'm gonna buy in the store.

✓ Yeah, I'm a very organized person and I like to have prepared what I'm gonna buy in the store.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'very organized person'. In English, singular countable nouns require an article or determiner. The phrase 'I very' is also incorrect and should be removed.

× So I'm always, I always try to do at least before I go out for shopping.

✓ So I'm always, I always try to do it at least before I go out shopping.

The phrase 'go out for shopping' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'go out shopping' without the preposition 'for'. Also, 'try to do at least' is incomplete and needs the object 'it' to be clear.

× Yes, I do make a list of things that I need to do, the task that I need to accomplish during the day.

✓ Yes, I do make a list of things that I need to do, the tasks that I need to accomplish during the day.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to agree with 'things' and the context of multiple activities to accomplish.

× And I think I'm that kind of person. I like to not be prepared for something.

✓ And I think I'm that kind of person. I don't like to be prepared for something.

The phrase 'I like to not be prepared' is awkward and incorrect in this context. The correct form is 'I don't like to be prepared' to express dislike.

× It's stressing me out to think about this beforehand, before my work, before I go somewhere.

✓ It stresses me out to think about this beforehand, before my work, before I go somewhere.

The verb 'stressing' is incorrectly used here. The correct form is 'stresses' to match the present simple tense and subject.

× I just like go with it.

✓ I just like to go with it.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to go' rather than the bare verb 'go'.

× I have my phone always on me, it's always in my pocket, so I know that I won't forget this from home and I can change the list whenever I have to just open my note up and I can change it so it's more.

✓ I always have my phone on me; it's always in my pocket, so I know that I won't forget it at home and I can change the list whenever I have to. I just open my notes and I can change it, so it's more convenient.

The phrase 'I have my phone always on me' is better as 'I always have my phone on me' for natural word order. 'Forget this from home' is incorrect; it should be 'forget it at home'. 'Open my note up' should be 'open my notes'. The sentence was also incomplete and needed clarification for fluency.