List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够自然，且有些句子不连贯。建议注意时态和句子结构，避免重复和语法错误。可以用更自然的表达方式来说明不喜欢列购物清单的原因。

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to browse freely and buy whatever catches my eye. Making a list feels restrictive and takes away the fun of shopping for me.

제안: 回答内容基本清晰，但存在语法错误和表达不够流畅的问题。建议注意动词时态和句子结构，使用连接词使回答更连贯。

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because I tend to forget tasks. For example, I once missed an important exam, so making lists helps me remember important things effectively.

제안: 回答中有语法错误且表达不够自然，部分句子不完整。建议避免使用负面词汇如“lazy”，并用更礼貌和自然的方式表达观点，同时注意句子完整和逻辑连贯。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time or makes them feel pressured to do tasks they don't enjoy. However, without lists, they might forget important things and end up spending more time fixing mistakes.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达不完整的问题，缺少关键名词。建议注意句子完整性和词汇准确性，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I carry it with me all the time, unlike paper lists. Also, some apps can remind me of tasks before their deadlines, which is very convenient.

× No, I don't like making a list.

✓ No, I don't like to make a list.

动词 'like' 后面可以接动名词或不定式，但在此语境中，使用不定式 'to make' 更符合习惯表达。

× When I shop I always just work in the supermarket and buy everything I like.

✓ When I shop, I always just walk in the supermarket and buy everything I like.

原句中的 'work' 应为 'walk'，因为购物时通常是走动而不是工作。

× Make a list will make me too busy to buy something.

✓ Making a list will make me too busy to buy something.

句子主语应为动名词短语 'Making a list'，而非动词原形 'Make a list'。

× I always forget something to do and I have even forget to attend last exam.

✓ I always forget something to do and I have even forgotten to attend the last exam.

完成时态中，动词 'forget' 应使用过去分词 'forgotten'。

× So I always make a list to remind me some important things.

✓ So I always make a list to remind me of some important things.

动词 'remind' 后应接介词 'of' 来引出被提醒的内容。

× Because some people are very lazy, they think making lists waste their time.

✓ Because some people are very lazy, they think making lists wastes their time.

主语 'making lists' 是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 'wastes'。

× However, without this they always forget some important things and it takes more time to fix that.

✓ However, without this, they always forget some important things and it takes more time to fix them.

代词 'that' 指代复数 'some important things'，应使用复数代词 'them'。

× And secondly, some people think making this is a way to enforce them.

✓ And secondly, some people think making this is a way to force them.

动词 'enforce' 用法不当，应使用 'force' 表示强迫某人做某事。

× Do something they don't like and they will be uncomfortable.

✓ Doing something they don't like makes them uncomfortable.

句子结构不完整，应使用动名词短语 'Doing something...' 并调整谓语。

× I prefer to make a list on my because everyday I took my with me, but I can't take a paper to everywhere anytime.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because every day I take it with me, but I can't take paper everywhere anytime.

缺少名词 'phone'，动词时态错误 'took' 应为 'take'，介词使用不当 'to everywhere anytime' 应为 'everywhere anytime'。

× Also make list on my phone is more convenient and some apps can remind me that I have to do something before which day.

✓ Also, making a list on my phone is more convenient and some apps can remind me that I have to do something before a certain day.

缺少主语 'making a list'，代词 'which day' 用法不当，应改为 'a certain day'。