ListPart 1 채점 보고서

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Part 1

시험관

Do you make a list when you shop?

수험생

Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need to buy, for example. It prevent me from forgotten important items and save time in the store.

시험관

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

수험생

Yes, I often make a list when I do housework because it helps me organize my tasks and let me remember anything I need to do.

시험관

Why don't some people like making lists?

수험생

Maybe some people don't like making list because they found it unconvenient. For example, they might feel that writing down tasks take too much effort.

시험관

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

수험생

On I prefer to make a list on my phone. On especially make a list on my memo because I think tick phone is more convenient than paper.

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총점

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Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

점수: 65.0

제안: 你的回答表达了观点,但存在语法错误,如“prevent me from forgotten”应为“prevents me from forgetting”。建议注意动词形式和时态的正确使用,同时避免冗余表达。

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need to buy. For example, it prevents me from forgetting important items and saves time in the store.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

점수: 70.0

제안: 回答基本清晰,但“let me remember anything”表达不够准确,建议使用“helps me remember all the tasks I need to do”。同时,句子结构可以更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I often make a list when I do housework because it helps me organize my tasks and remember all the things I need to do.

Why don't some people like making lists?

점수: 60.0

제안: 回答中存在拼写错误,如“unconvenient”应为“unconvenient”,且时态不一致。建议注意拼写和时态一致性,同时丰富理由表达。

예시: Maybe some people don't like making lists because they find it inconvenient. For example, they might feel that writing down tasks takes too much effort.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

점수: 50.0

제안: 回答中有语法和表达错误,如“On I prefer”应为“I prefer”,“tick phone”表达不清。建议简化句子结构,使用正确的词汇表达偏好。

예시: I prefer to make a list on my phone, especially using the memo app, because I think it's more convenient than paper.

문법

Singular and plural issue

× It prevent me from forgotten important items and save time in the store.

It prevents me from forgetting important items and saves time in the store.

主语是单数的"It",谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"prevents"和"saves"。此外,"forgotten"应改为动名词形式"forgetting",因为介词"from"后应接动名词。

Verb + -ing form

× It prevent me from forgotten important items and save time in the store.

It prevents me from forgetting important items and saves time in the store.

介词"from"后面应接动名词形式,故"forgotten"应改为"forgetting"。

Verb + -ing form

× Yes, I often make a list when I do housework because it helps me organize my tasks and let me remember anything I need to do.

Yes, I often make a list when I do housework because it helps me organize my tasks and lets me remember anything I need to do.

主语是单数的"it",谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"lets"。

Singular and plural issue

× Maybe some people don't like making list because they found it unconvenient.

Maybe some people don't like making lists because they find it inconvenient.

"list"应使用复数形式"lists",因为泛指多次制作清单的行为。动词"found"应改为现在时"find",与前文时态保持一致。单词"unconvenient"拼写错误,应为"inconvenient"。

Past tense issue

× Maybe some people don't like making list because they found it unconvenient.

Maybe some people don't like making lists because they find it inconvenient.

句子主句为一般现在时,故从句动词"found"应改为一般现在时"find"。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× On I prefer to make a list on my phone.

I prefer to make a list on my phone.

句首多余的介词"On"应删除。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× On especially make a list on my memo because I think tick phone is more convenient than paper.

I especially make a list on my memo because I think using my phone is more convenient than paper.

句首多余的介词"On"应删除。"tick phone"表达不清,应改为"using my phone"。

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