List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够清晰，存在语法错误，且表达略显重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I often forget what to buy. It helps me stay organized, and I can check the list to make sure I don't miss anything.

제안: 回答中存在语法和表达不完整的问题，句子较长且不够连贯。建议使用简洁明了的句子，并用连接词连接观点和原因。

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. As a result, I can complete all my tasks before the deadlines.

제안: 回答中逻辑不够清晰，表达含糊。建议明确表达观点，使用因果连接词，并提供具体理由。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it wastes time. They prefer to finish their tasks quickly without planning.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，且信息不准确。建议清晰表达偏好，正确使用词汇，并提供具体理由。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it can set notifications and alarms to remind me of deadlines and when to start tasks.

× So I think at least can make it more organized and I can check the list when I if I missed something I can go buy it.

✓ So I think at least it can make it more organized, and I can check the list. If I missed something, I can go buy it.

句子中缺少主语“it”，导致结构不完整。动词短语“can make”前应有主语。建议补充主语，使句子完整。

× Yes, I make a list for my work too, because I also believe that it helps me to stay organized and it works because I can complete all the tasks before the deadline using, at least for working.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work too, because I also believe that it helps me to stay organized and it works because I can complete all the tasks before the deadline, at least for work.

句子中“using, at least for working”结构不正确，表达不清晰。应去掉“using”，并将“working”改为名词“work”，使表达更自然。

× I prefer to make the list on our because nowadays the smartphones can't set a notification and alarms to remind us the deadlines and also reminds us when to start to do the.

✓ I prefer to make the list on my phone because nowadays smartphones can set notifications and alarms to remind us of the deadlines and also remind us when to start doing things.

句中“on our”错误，应为“on my phone”。“can't set a notification and alarms”应为复数“notifications and alarms”。“remind us the deadlines”缺少介词“of”。最后“start to do the”不完整，应补充完整表达。