List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有较多重复和语法错误，影响了表达的流畅性。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，同时注意时态和动词形式的正确使用。

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what to buy and saves time.

제안: 回答中存在重复和不完整的句子，建议使用连贯的句子表达观点，并用连接词使内容更流畅。

예시: Yes, I often make lists for my work, especially when reviewing homework, because it helps me stay organized and improves my efficiency.

제안: 回答不完整且重复过多，表达不清晰。建议明确表达观点，避免重复，并补充完整的句子。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it limits their freedom and can be stressful.

제안: 回答较为完整，但有语法错误和重复。建议简化表达，注意句子结构和词汇的准确使用。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because there are many apps that help me manage them, and I can check my list anytime since I always have my phone with me.

× Yes, I always make a list when I when I went go shopping because I think make list, making list is convenient for me to choose what, what, what things to buy.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I think making a list is convenient for me to choose what things to buy.

句中出现了动词形式错误，'went go'应为一般现在时的'go'，因为描述的是习惯性动作。同时，'make list'应改为动名词短语'making a list'，表示动作的进行。建议注意动词时态和动名词的正确使用。

× I often make a list for my work. For example, I always make a list when I when I review my homework after class because I think making this helps me a lot.

✓ I often make a list for my work. For example, I always make a list when I review my homework after class because I think making it helps me a lot.

句中'making this'用法不当，'this'指代不明确，改为'making it'更合适，指代前文提到的'list'。建议注意代词的正确使用以避免歧义。

× Because maybe some people think making this will reduce their freedom and also maybe, maybe maybe make them feel very exhausted and sometimes feel very, very, very, very, very stressed. They think making their.

✓ Because maybe some people think making lists will reduce their freedom and also maybe make them feel very exhausted and sometimes very stressed.

句中'making this'和'they think making their'表达不完整且代词使用错误，应明确指代为'making lists'。此外，句子末尾不完整，需删去或补充完整。建议注意代词的准确指代和句子完整性。

× Well in my opinion I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think making list on my there are a lot of apps on my phone there about help me to manage my list.

✓ Well, in my opinion, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think making lists on my phone is convenient; there are a lot of apps on my phone that help me manage my list.

句中'list on my there are'结构混乱，缺少谓语动词，且介词使用不当。应将句子拆分，明确表达'在手机上制作清单'，并正确使用关系代词'that'引导定语从句。建议注意句子结构和介词的正确使用。

× Also we use phone everyday and so I can check my list conveniently when I when I see my see the list on my phone.

✓ Also, we use phones every day, so I can check my list conveniently when I see the list on my phone.

句中'we use phone'应为复数形式'phones'，且重复出现'when I when I see my see'，应删除多余部分。建议注意名词复数形式和避免重复。