List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating words. Also, start with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons. For example, explain why making a list helps you shop better.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember the items I need, especially clothes and other essentials. This way, I avoid buying unnecessary things and save time.

제안: Your answer is clear but has some grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about how lists help you. Avoid repeating the same idea.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important tasks. This method improves my productivity and reduces stress.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'seems I know'.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they trust their memory to remember everything. However, I prefer making notes since I often forget things without a list.

제안: Your answer has unclear parts and grammatical mistakes. Avoid confusing phrases like '4 is available'. Be clear and concise, and explain your preference with reasons using linking words.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me, unlike paper which I might forget. This makes it easier to check and update my list anytime.

× Yes I make list while shopping as I'm a shopaholic person and due to due to purchase of clothes or any items a list is necessary to make.

✓ Yes, I make a list while shopping as I'm a shopaholic person and due to the purchase of clothes or any items, a list is necessary to make.

The word 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a' before it. Also, 'due to due to' is a repetition error; only one 'due to' is needed. Adding 'the' before 'purchase' specifies the particular purchase being referred to.

× Yes absolutely I make a list of my work as list helps people to not forgot any special thing or any good thing which is necessary and not be forgotten.

✓ Yes, absolutely I make a list of my work as the list helps people not to forget any special or important thing which is necessary and should not be forgotten.

The noun 'list' is singular and should be preceded by the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific list. Also, 'forgot' is the past tense; here, the base form 'forget' is needed after 'to'. The phrase 'any good thing' is vague; 'important thing' is clearer.

× List is very necessary to be organized in every manner so that's why I make a list of every situation.

✓ A list is very necessary to be organized in every manner, so that's why I make a list for every situation.

The noun 'List' needs an article 'A' when mentioned for the first time. Also, 'make a list of every situation' is better expressed as 'make a list for every situation' to indicate purpose.

× People don't make notes as they have a good memory to memorise everything clearly.

✓ People don't make notes because they have a good memory to memorise everything clearly.

The conjunction 'as' can be ambiguous; 'because' is clearer to express reason. The pronoun usage is correct here, but the sentence benefits from clearer conjunction.

× But seems I know that I make a clear note because I sometimes forgot things.

✓ But it seems I know that I make clear notes because I sometimes forget things.

The phrase 'seems I know' is awkward; 'it seems' is correct. 'Forgot' is past tense, but the present tense 'forget' is needed here because of 'sometimes'. Also, 'a clear note' should be plural 'clear notes' to match context.

× I preferably make a list on phone because nowadays phones are very necessary for everyone and phones are kept within us.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because nowadays phones are very necessary for everyone and we always keep phones with us.

'Preferably' is an adverb; the verb 'prefer' is correct here. 'On phone' should be 'on my phone' to specify possession. 'Phones are kept within us' is incorrect; 'we keep phones with us' is the correct expression.

× Sometimes paper is not available in any situation, but 4 is available, so that's why I make notes in phone.

✓ Sometimes paper is not available in some situations, but the phone is available, so that's why I make notes on my phone.

'Paper' is uncountable but here refers to sheets, so 'some situations' is better than 'any situation'. '4 is available' seems a typo; it should be 'the phone is available'. Also, 'in phone' should be 'on my phone' to indicate where notes are made.