List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“I'm the people”应为“I am the kind of person”。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I like to plan ahead. It helps me shop more efficiently and avoid forgetting anything.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“makes”应为“make”，且句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

예시: Yes, I sometimes make a plan for my work because it helps me stay organized. For example, when I rewrite an article, making a list helps me decide what to write in each section.

제안: 回答较为自然，但有口语填充词“uh”，建议减少使用。表达可以更简洁，逻辑更紧凑。

예시: That's an interesting question. Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be flexible and not plan everything in advance. It often depends on their personality.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇，如“prefer make”应为“prefer to make”，“write write”。建议注意语法正确性，避免重复，表达更简洁。

예시: I used to prefer making lists on paper because I didn't have a smartphone. But now, I find it easier to make lists on my phone since I always have it with me.

× I'll make a list because I'm the people who like to plan for everything and I think making a list can help me promote my efficiencies when I shop.

✓ I'll make a list because I'm the person who likes to plan for everything and I think making a list can help me improve my efficiency when I shop.

这里“I'm the people”错误地使用了复数名词“people”，应使用单数“person”来与主语“I”一致；“like”应改为“likes”以符合第三人称单数；“promote my efficiencies”表达不自然，改为“improve my efficiency”更准确。

× Yes, I sometimes makes a plan for my work uh because I think it can help me to be more organized.

✓ Yes, I sometimes make a plan for my work uh because I think it can help me to be more organized.

主语“I”是第一人称单数，谓语动词“makes”应使用原形“make”，以符合主谓一致规则。

× For example, when I need to re write an article, uh listing can help me know what to write in the first section or second section.

✓ For example, when I need to rewrite an article, uh listing can help me know what to write in the first section or second section.

“re write”应合并为一个词“rewrite”，表示“重写”，这是一个固定的动词形式。

× So that's a interesting question.

✓ So that's an interesting question.

“a”用于辅音音素开头的词前，“interesting”以元音音素开头，应使用不定冠词“an”。

× But now I think it's much easier to listing on the phone because sometimes I have no paper and pen.

✓ But now I think it's much easier to list on the phone because sometimes I have no paper and pen.

“to”后应接动词原形，故“to listing”应改为“to list”。

× I what I only need to do is take out my phone and write write it down.

✓ What I only need to do is take out my phone and write it down.

句首多余的“I”应删除，且“write write”重复，应只保留一次“write”。