List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且句子较长且重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: No, I don't usually make a shopping list because I like to look for discounts and buy things that catch my interest. Making a list feels boring to me, and I prefer to shop more freely.

제안: 回答内容较完整，但存在语法错误和重复表达。建议注意句子结构，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I work or study because it helps me remember my tasks. Moreover, I feel a sense of achievement and happiness when I complete everything on the list.

제안: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构重复且缺少连接词。建议使用更清晰的句子结构和连接词，丰富内容细节。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they think it takes too much time. Others prefer to rely on their memory, and some believe lists are ineffective since they can't always refer to them.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，句子未完整。建议注意句子完整性，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because there are many apps available. These apps can link with my alarm to remind me of tasks, which is very convenient.

× I prefer to buy what I saw is interesting when I shopping.

✓ I prefer to buy what I saw is interesting when I am shopping.

这里缺少动词be的现在分词形式am，表示正在进行的动作。动词shopping前应加am，构成现在进行时。

× I must I have to buy what I.

✓ I must buy what I have to.

句子中出现了重复的情态动词must和have to，应选择其中一个。且句子不完整，需补全。

× when I shopping.

✓ when I am shopping.

shopping前缺少be动词的现在分词形式am，构成现在进行时。

× I see sometimes people think it doesn't work because they can't always see.

✓ I see sometimes people think it doesn't work because they can't always see it.

句子缺少宾语it，导致结构不完整。

× So I think it's very convenient with with my cell phone and when I.

✓ So I think it's very convenient with my cell phone.

句子末尾不完整，应删除多余部分。