List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you make a list, and give a specific example.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me stay organised and ensures I don't forget any important items. For example, when I shop for groceries, having a list prevents me from buying unnecessary things and helps me stick to my budget.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Focus on giving a direct response with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas and explain how making lists helps you at work.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list for my work tasks to ensure I don't forget anything important. It definitely works because it helps me complete all the necessary tasks and keeps me focused throughout the day.

제안: Your answer is very unclear and does not directly address the question. Try to give a clear topic sentence explaining why some people dislike making lists, then support it with specific reasons. Avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer to be more spontaneous. They might feel that lists limit their freedom and creativity.

제안: Your answer has many unclear parts and grammatical mistakes. Try to clearly state your preference and explain why, using specific examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and easily accessible. For example, I can add or check items anytime without worrying about losing a paper list. Using my phone helps me stay organized and remember all my important tasks.

× Yes, I usually make less before I go shop.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping.

The word 'less' is incorrect here; the correct noun is 'list' which is singular. Also, 'go shop' should be 'go shopping' to use the gerund form after 'go'.

× Yes, I usually make less before I go shop.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping.

After 'go', the verb should be in the '-ing' form to indicate the activity, so 'shop' becomes 'shopping'. This is a common English structure for activities following 'go'.

× Helps me stay organised, ensure that I don't forgot anything important items.

✓ It helps me stay organised and ensures that I don't forget any important items.

The original sentence lacks a subject and has incorrect verb forms. 'Helps' and 'ensure' need a subject, so 'It' is added. 'Forgot' should be 'forget' to match present tense. 'Important items' needs 'any' as a quantifier. Also, 'and' connects the two clauses properly.

× For example when I drop for a grocery, having a let's say who is hunting and preventing from by unnecessary eating.

✓ For example, when I go grocery shopping, I have a list that helps me avoid unnecessary eating.

'Drop for a grocery' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go grocery shopping'. The rest of the sentence is unclear and ungrammatical; rephrased to convey intended meaning. Prepositions like 'from by' are incorrect and removed.

× Yes, I usually make a lift while my work if they already know and ensure I don't forget it doesn't pass.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list at work if I already know what to do and ensure I don't forget anything.

'Lift' should be 'list'. 'While my work' is incorrect; 'at work' is correct preposition. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I usually make a lift while my work if they already know and ensure I don't forget it doesn't pass.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list at work if I already know what to do and ensure I don't forget anything.

The pronoun 'they' is unclear and incorrect here; replaced with 'I' to match the subject. 'It doesn't pass' is unclear and removed for clarity.

× It definitely works because how many prototype one need will be done and keep me focused throughout the day.

✓ It definitely works because the number of tasks I need to complete is clear and it keeps me focused throughout the day.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Prototype one need' is incorrect; replaced with 'the number of tasks I need to complete'. Added 'it' as subject for 'keeps me focused'.

× Tell me what it's like make a list because they find it restricted.

✓ Some people don't like making a list because they find it restrictive.

The sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'Tell me what it's like make a list' is incorrect; rephrased to answer the question properly. 'Restricted' should be 'restrictive' as an adjective describing the feeling.

× I prefer more Ben 10 minutes reporting of nice haircuts originally some make sure I'm in favorite picture of struck by coming slowly reminds everything.

✓ I prefer spending more than 10 minutes planning because it helps me remember everything clearly.

The original sentence is largely unintelligible. Rewritten to convey a reasonable meaning related to planning time and memory. 'More Ben 10 minutes' is incorrect quantifier usage; replaced with 'more than 10 minutes'.

× I prefer making less on my phone because it is more convenient can't accessible.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and accessible.

'Making less' should be 'making lists'. 'Can't accessible' is incorrect; replaced with 'and accessible' to connect the adjectives properly.

× For example, I get in the layout order I am any without worrying about losing a paycheck.

✓ For example, I can organize my list in order without worrying about losing a paper list.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Get in the layout order I am any' is incorrect; rephrased to express organizing the list. 'Losing a paycheck' is likely a mishearing of 'losing a paper list'.

× Also using an phone having me through organized before I can cut your mind to it and all of that important tasks.

✓ Also, using my phone helps me stay organized because I can focus my mind on it and all the important tasks.

'Using an phone having me through organized' is incorrect; replaced with 'using my phone helps me stay organized'. 'Cut your mind to it' is incorrect; replaced with 'focus my mind on it'. 'All of that important tasks' corrected to 'all the important tasks'.