List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但表达略显重复且缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并避免重复表达。

예시: Yes, definitely. Making a list helps me control my finances because without it, I might buy unnecessary items and spend too much money.

제안: 回答内容丰富，但语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较复杂且缺少适当的连接词。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词提高连贯性，并注意语法正确。

예시: Yes, it works well. I make a to-do list to organize my tasks, prioritize urgent ones, and manage deadlines, which helps improve my productivity.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但语法错误较多，且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意主谓一致，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并丰富细节。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer spontaneity and flexibility, and they may find planning stressful.

제안: 回答内容完整，但表达略显口语化且缺少流畅的连接词。建议使用更自然的连接词和句式，使表达更连贯。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient to create or edit anytime, easy to carry, and can remind me of important tasks with alarms, unlike paper lists.

× It work yes.

✓ It works, yes.

主语是第三人称单数（It），谓语动词应加-s，变为works。

× so they will feels too much stressful with the planning or lists.

✓ so they will feel too much stress with the planning or lists.

情态动词will后接动词原形，不能用feels。stress是名词，形容词应为stressful，句意应为“感到压力太大”，应使用feel stress。

× First of all it's convenient to start or change anytime and the second one the phone, it's easier to carry it and sometimes it even remind you on some important things like an alarm clock but the paper cannot.

✓ First of all, it's convenient to start or change anytime, and secondly, the phone is easier to carry, and sometimes it even reminds you of some important things like an alarm clock, but paper cannot.

主语the phone是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，remind改为reminds。短语remind you on应为remind you of。句子结构不清晰，需调整连接词和标点。