List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, complete your sentences fully to avoid confusion. For example, clearly state what you sometimes use when making a list. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I don't always make a list when I shop, but I try to do so because it helps me stay organized and remember important items. Sometimes, I use my phone to create the list, which is very convenient.

제안: Clarify your ideas and avoid contradictory statements. Use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' properly to explain your reasoning. Also, try to expand your answer with specific examples or reasons to enrich the content.

예시: I don't usually make a list for my work because my tasks are often unplanned and change frequently. Therefore, using a checklist is not very practical for me, although I like the idea of being organized.

제안: Avoid repeating words and unclear phrasing. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Try to express your opinion more clearly and confidently.

예시: Some people might not like making lists because they have little experience with them. However, I believe that making a list before starting a task is very helpful for staying organized and focused.

제안: Complete your sentences fully and avoid abrupt endings. Use linking words to explain your preferences clearly. Provide specific reasons why you use both methods to make your answer more effective.

예시: I usually use both paper and my phone to make lists. Sometimes, I prefer paper because I can easily share it with others, but I also like using my phone since it's convenient to carry and update my lists anytime.

× Not always, but I uh, try to make a list before shopping because it helps me be more organized and not forget something, uh, special.

✓ Not always, but I uh, try to make a list before shopping because it helps me be more organized and not forget anything special.

The phrase 'not forget something special' is less natural here; 'anything special' is more appropriate when referring to unspecified items in a list. This is a singular/plural usage issue where 'something' should be replaced with 'anything' to fit the context better.

× Despite that shopping issue, I don't make a list for my work because my work is unplanned and I cannot plan something.

✓ Despite that shopping issue, I don't make a list for my work because my work is unplanned and I cannot plan anything.

Using 'something' in negative sentences is incorrect; 'anything' should be used instead. This is a singular/plural issue related to quantifiers in negative contexts.

× I don't know why don't some people don't don't like making lists, but I think maybe they have don't have experience.

✓ I don't know why some people don't like making lists, but I think maybe they don't have experience.

The sentence contains repeated negatives and incorrect word order. The phrase 'why don't some people don't don't like' is incorrect. The correct form is 'why some people don't like'. Also, 'have don't have' is incorrect; it should be 'don't have'. This is a singular/plural and sentence structure issue.

× I don't know why don't some people don't don't like making lists, but I think maybe they have don't have experience.

✓ I don't know why some people don't like making lists, but I think maybe they don't have experience.

The sentence has multiple negatives and incorrect word order, causing confusion. The correct structure removes extra 'don't' and places the negative correctly. This is a sentence structure error.

× How useful is the making list Before doing something, I think making some list helps you.

✓ How useful making a list is before doing something; I think making a list helps you.

The phrase 'the making list' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list'. Also, 'some list' is incorrect; it should be 'a list'. Capitalization of 'Before' is also incorrect. This is an adjective/adverb and article usage issue.

× In my practice I use both of them because sometimes you need to give someone your list or keep in your telephone.

✓ In my practice, I use both of them because sometimes you need to give someone your list or keep it on your phone.

The phrase 'keep in your telephone' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to storing something on a device. Also, 'telephone' is better replaced with 'phone' in this context. This is a preposition usage issue.

× Overall, I like to do lists in my notes in form and sometimes it.

✓ Overall, I like to make lists in my notes app, and sometimes I use other methods.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Do lists in my notes in form and sometimes it' is not grammatically correct. The correction provides a clear and complete sentence. This is a sentence structure error.