List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
Yes, I will because uh, it's my make. It can make me uh, know what I should to buy clearly and uh, it will not make me uh, forget what I need.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
Yes, I always make lists for my work because I think it's a good way to make my work orderly and offensively and making this really make my work more fluently.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
I think a lot of people may feel writing everything down in the paper will be very troublesome and difficult. Maybe they think they don't want to remind themselves of everything.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
I prefer to make lists on my phone because I think making lists on phone is more convenient. As we all know, almost everybody has their phone on their hands and go everywhere. So a paper may be not very convenient convenient for us.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 60.0제안: 你的回答中有很多语法错误和重复的词语，建议你使用更自然的表达方式，并且避免使用“uh”等填充词。回答时应直接回答问题，并用简洁的句子说明原因。
예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答中有词汇使用错误，如“offensively”不合适，且句子结构不清晰。建议使用正确的词汇表达，并用连接词使句子更连贯。
예시: Yes, I always make lists for my work because it helps me stay organized and complete tasks more efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答较为自然，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，同时避免重复表达。建议丰富细节，说明原因。
예시: I think some people find writing lists troublesome because it takes time, and they may prefer to rely on memory instead of reminders.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中有重复词语和语法错误，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达。
예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient; we always carry our phones, so it's easier than using paper.
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