List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有很多语法错误和重复的词语，影响了表达的自然性和清晰度。建议你直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，并避免重复。可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting anything.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当（如'offensively'），影响了表达的准确性。建议使用正确的词汇和语法，清晰表达观点，并用连接词使句子流畅。

예시: Yes, I always make lists for my work because it helps me organize my tasks efficiently and allows me to work more smoothly.

제안: 你的回答表达了原因，但句子结构可以更自然，避免重复。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并提供更具体的细节。

예시: Some people may dislike making lists because they find writing everything down troublesome, and they might prefer to rely on memory instead of constant reminders.

제안: 回答中有重复词语和语法错误，影响表达的流畅性。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient; since we always carry our phones, it's easier than using paper lists.

× Yes, I will because uh, it's my make.

✓ Yes, I do because uh, it's my habit.

The modal verb 'will' is incorrectly used here to express a habitual action. The correct auxiliary verb for habitual actions in the present tense is 'do'. Also, 'make' is incorrectly used; 'habit' is more appropriate to express a regular practice.

× It can make me uh, know what I should to buy clearly and uh, it will not make me uh, forget what I need.

✓ It can help me know clearly what I should buy and it will not make me forget what I need.

The phrase 'make me know' is unnatural; 'help me know' is better. Also, 'should to buy' is incorrect; 'should buy' is correct because 'should' is a modal verb followed by the base verb without 'to'.

× Yes, I always make lists for my work because I think it's a good way to make my work orderly and offensively and making this really make my work more fluently.

✓ Yes, I always make lists for my work because I think it's a good way to make my work orderly and efficient, and doing this really makes my work smoother.

The adverb 'offensively' is incorrect here; likely the intended word is 'efficiently' or 'effectively'. Also, 'more fluently' is not appropriate for work; 'smoother' or 'more smoothly' fits better. The sentence structure is also improved for clarity.

× I think a lot of people may feel writing everything down in the paper will be very troublesome and difficult.

✓ I think a lot of people may feel writing everything down on paper will be very troublesome and difficult.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'paper' in this context; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to writing on a surface like paper.

× Maybe they think they don't want to remind themselves of everything.

✓ Maybe they think they don't want to remind themselves about everything.

The phrase 'remind themselves of everything' is acceptable, but 'remind themselves about everything' is more natural in this context. However, this is a minor issue and can be considered stylistic.

× I prefer to make lists on my phone because I think making lists on phone is more convenient.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because I think making lists on the phone is more convenient.

When referring to a specific device like 'phone', the definite article 'the' is needed before 'phone'.

× As we all know, almost everybody has their phone on their hands and go everywhere.

✓ As we all know, almost everybody has their phone in their hands and goes everywhere.

The phrase 'on their hands' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in their hands'. Also, 'everybody' is singular, so the verb should be 'goes' instead of 'go'.

× So a paper may be not very convenient convenient for us.

✓ So paper may not be very convenient for us.

The article 'a' before 'paper' is incorrect because 'paper' here refers to the material in general, which is uncountable. Also, the word 'convenient' is repeated twice mistakenly.