List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but a bit repetitive and lacks natural flow. Try to make your sentences more concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I usually don't make a list when I shop, but I realize it's helpful because I often forget items. Therefore, I plan to start making lists to remember everything I need.

제안: Your answer has good points but is unclear and contains many fillers. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid unnecessary hesitation. Also, use linking words to connect your reasons logically.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list for my work, and it works well. It helps me stay organized, saves time, and makes me feel more comfortable and efficient.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations. Try to organize your ideas logically and use complete sentences. Avoid filler words and be specific in your explanations.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they believe they won't forget anything. Others find it lazy or prefer to shop spontaneously without planning.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains many hesitations and unclear phrases. Try to speak more confidently and clearly. Use linking words to explain your preference logically.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I always have my phone with me, so I won't forget the list anywhere.

× I didn't make a list so when I shop, but I think that I have to make my list because I always forget something I want to buy because I did not make a list.

✓ I didn't make a list when I shopped, but I think that I have to make my list because I always forget something I want to buy if I do not make a list.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. 'Shop' should be in past tense 'shopped' to match 'didn't make'. Also, 'because I did not make a list' is better expressed as 'if I do not make a list' to indicate a habitual condition. This correction ensures tense consistency and clarity.

× That's why it would be very helpful for me to make a list when I will shop.

✓ That's why it would be very helpful for me to make a list when I shop.

In English, after time expressions like 'when', the present simple tense is used to refer to future events, not 'will' plus verb. Therefore, 'when I will shop' should be 'when I shop' to be grammatically correct.

× It helps me to stay organized, saves my time and uh, makes me comfortable, makes me feel umm and stay uh, convenient and umm improve the face of my.

✓ It helps me to stay organized, saves my time, makes me comfortable, makes me feel good, helps me stay comfortable, and improves my mood.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and awkward phrasing. 'Stay convenient' is incorrect; 'stay comfortable' is better. 'Improve the face of my' is unclear and likely a misuse; 'improves my mood' or similar is appropriate. Also, parallel structure is needed for clarity.

× Because, uh, people think they won't forget anything, uh, they are lazy to do this and they prefer just to enter the shop or enter the mall and umm, and shop there or, uh, maybe they don't make some uh, lease because they buy, uh.

✓ Because, uh, people think they won't forget anything, uh, they are lazy to do this and they prefer just to enter the shop or the mall and, umm, shop there or, uh, maybe they don't make some, uh, list because they buy, uh.

The word 'lease' is incorrect here; it should be 'list'. Also, 'enter the shop or enter the mall' is better as 'enter the shop or the mall' for conciseness. The preposition use is mostly correct but the vocabulary error affects meaning.

× Uh, I prefer to make a list on my phone because uh, I will be, umm, uh, I will be, uh, supposed, uh, uh, and guaranteed that uh, the least, I won't forget the least somewhere because I have my phone.

✓ Uh, I prefer to make a list on my phone because, uh, I am supposed to, and I am guaranteed that I won't forget the list somewhere because I have my phone.

The original sentence misuses 'will be supposed' which is incorrect. The correct modal verb phrase is 'I am supposed to'. Also, 'the least' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'the list'. The correction clarifies the modal verb usage and fixes vocabulary errors.