List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Faut que tu fasses attention à la clarté pis la fluidité de ta réponse. Essaie de faire des phrases plus courtes pis d'utiliser des mots de liaison pour que ça coule mieux. Aussi, évite les répétitions pis fais attention à la grammaire pour que ça sonne plus naturel.

예시: Yes, I always make a grocery list because I shop only on weekends and have limited time. Therefore, making a list helps me remember everything and shop more efficiently.

제안: Ta réponse est bonne, mais tu devrais utiliser des mots de liaison pour mieux connecter tes idées. Aussi, fais attention à la structure des phrases pour qu'elles soient plus naturelles et évite les répétitions comme "make list" plusieurs fois.

예시: Yes, as a cleaning supervisor, I always make lists to assign tasks to employees. I prepare them on paper or computer, then print and distribute them. This method helps the work get done quickly and efficiently.

제안: Essaie d'être plus clair pis précis dans ta réponse. Utilise des mots de liaison pour organiser tes idées et évite les erreurs grammaticales. Par exemple, dis "making lists is time-consuming" au lieu de "the time consuming".

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming. They prefer to rely on their memory, believing it is sufficient to remember tasks without writing them down.

제안: Ta réponse est bonne mais tu devrais corriger les erreurs de vocabulaire et de grammaire. Aussi, utilise des mots de liaison pour rendre ta réponse plus fluide et naturelle.

예시: I prefer both paper and phone lists depending on the situation. If I have my phone, I use a note app to make lists. Otherwise, I write them on paper, which can be time-consuming but still helpful.

× I always make a grocery items list and I love to do that.

✓ I always make a grocery item list and I love to do that.

The phrase 'a grocery items list' incorrectly combines a singular article 'a' with the plural noun 'items'. It should be 'a grocery item list' to maintain singular agreement.

× I don't want to forget any of the thing because I do grocery on weekend

✓ I don't want to forget any of the things because I do grocery on weekends

The phrase 'any of the thing' should be plural 'any of the things' to match the plural sense. Also, 'on weekend' should be 'on weekends' to indicate habitual action.

× I only have limited time to do grocery so making list makes me more comfortable to in the grocery and more.

✓ I only have limited time to do grocery so making a list makes me more comfortable in the grocery store and more.

The phrase 'making list' needs an article 'a' before 'list'. Also, 'to in the grocery' is incorrect; it should be 'in the grocery store' for clarity.

× I always make list because I have to give each task to every employee.

✓ I always make a list because I have to give each task to every employee.

The phrase 'make list' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'list' to be grammatically correct.

× I make list on a paper, sometimes on a computer and then I print the form and then give to the workers.

✓ I make a list on paper, sometimes on a computer, and then I print the form and give it to the workers.

'Make list' needs the article 'a'. Also, 'on a paper' should be 'on paper' as 'paper' is uncountable here. Added 'it' after 'give' for clarity.

× There would be many reasons that some people don't like making list.

✓ There would be many reasons that some people don't like making lists.

'Making list' should be plural 'making lists' to refer to the general activity of making multiple lists.

× First and foremost is coming out of my mind is that the time consuming.

✓ First and foremost, what comes to my mind is that it is time-consuming.

The original sentence is awkward and lacks modal verb structure. 'What comes to my mind' is the correct expression. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' and preceded by 'it is'.

× They believe that making list takes a lot of time otherwise they could only remember that as in their mind

✓ They believe that making lists takes a lot of time; otherwise, they could just remember it in their mind.

'Making list' should be 'making lists'. 'Could only remember that as in their mind' is awkward; 'could just remember it in their mind' is clearer and correct modal usage.

× I believe they have a enough memory to.

✓ I believe they have enough memory to do so.

The article 'a' before 'enough' is incorrect; 'enough' does not need an article. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'to do so' completes the thought.

× It depends on the situation such as if I have access to the phone, I would definitely make a list on my phone.

✓ It depends on the situation; for example, if I have access to my phone, I would definitely make a list on it.

'Access to the phone' is better as 'access to my phone' for specificity. Also, 'make a list on my phone' is correct, but 'on it' avoids repetition. Added semicolon and 'for example' for clarity.

× There is a app on iPhone, iPhone called not so I can make nest on there.

✓ There is an app on the iPhone called 'Notes' where I can make notes.

'A app' should be 'an app' due to vowel sound. 'iPhone' needs 'the' before it. 'Not so' is likely 'Notes'. 'Make nest on there' is incorrect; should be 'make notes there'.

× But in case if I don't have access to my phone, I prefer to make a list on the paper.

✓ But in case I don't have access to my phone, I prefer to make a list on paper.

'In case if' is redundant; use 'in case' alone. 'On the paper' should be 'on paper' as paper is uncountable here.

× It is time consuming however it can be beneficial.

✓ It is time-consuming; however, it can be beneficial.

'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective. Added semicolon and comma for correct punctuation.