List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が不自然で、言い淀みや繰り返しが多いです。より自然で効果的な答えにするために、簡潔に主題文を述べ、その後具体的な理由や例を付け加えてください。例えば、「I always make a shopping list to avoid forgetting items because I tend to be forgetful. This helps me manage my budget better.」のように。

예시: I always make a shopping list to avoid forgetting items because I tend to be forgetful. This helps me manage my budget better.

제안: 回答が不明瞭で、言い淀みが多く、内容が伝わりにくいです。質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べ、具体的な例を加えると良いでしょう。例えば、「Yes, I make a list for my work every day because forgetting tasks can cause serious problems. It helps me stay organized and meet deadlines.」のように。

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work every day because forgetting tasks can cause serious problems. It helps me stay organized and meet deadlines.

제안: 質問の意図を理解していないため、答えが的外れです。質問に直接答え、理由を推測して具体的に説明してください。例えば、「Some people may dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things naturally. However, I find lists very helpful.」のように。

예시: Some people may dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things naturally. However, I find lists very helpful.

제안: 回答が不明瞭で、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して明確に答え、理由を述べ、具体的な例を加えてください。例えば、「I prefer making lists on my smartphone because it's convenient and always with me. For example, I can easily add or remove items anytime.」のように。

예시: I prefer making lists on my smartphone because it's convenient and always with me. For example, I can easily add or remove items anytime.

× I already uh, make a memory uh, for not to forget uh, the item I want to buy.

✓ I already make a note so that I don't forget the item I want to buy.

The phrase 'make a memory' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'make a note' or 'remember'. Also, 'for not to forget' is ungrammatical; it should be 'so that I don't forget'. This correction uses the correct verb forms and conjunctions to express purpose.

× I am forgettable.

✓ I tend to forget things.

The adjective 'forgettable' means 'easily forgotten by others', which is not the intended meaning. The speaker wants to express that they tend to forget things, so a phrase like 'I tend to forget things' is more appropriate.

× So this is very important to uh, use money for.

✓ So this is very important for managing money.

The phrase 'use money for' is incomplete and unclear. The preposition 'for' should be followed by a noun or gerund that clarifies the purpose. 'Managing money' fits the context better.

× It is uh, like uh, one of my routine to umm, make a list for my work umm, because because umm, it is very uh, dangerous if I forgot that umm, time war umm.

✓ It is like one of my routines to make a list for my work because it is very dangerous if I forget something important.

'One of my routine' should be 'one of my routines' to match plural form. 'If I forgot' should be 'if I forget' to maintain present tense. 'Time war' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation; replaced with 'something important' for clarity.

× I don't know what exactly is the reason for people who make a list, uh, why they make a list, but in in for me, umm, it's very convenient umm, to umm company.

✓ I don't know exactly the reason why some people make a list, but for me, it's very convenient to do so.

The phrase 'in in for me' is redundant and incorrect; corrected to 'for me'. 'To umm company' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation; replaced with 'to do so' to refer back to making a list.

× Umm, whatever it I I put to my uh put to I make a list on my smartphone cut uh smartphone it's very uh.

✓ I make a list on my smartphone, and I always carry it with me.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence expressing the intended meaning.

× I take uh out the uh smartphone whenever I call, so it's very.

✓ I take out my smartphone whenever I need to call, so it's very convenient.

The phrase 'I take uh out the uh smartphone' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'I take out my smartphone'. Added 'need to' for clarity and completed the sentence with 'convenient' to express the intended meaning.