List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup jelas, tetapi ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan penggunaan kata yang kurang tepat. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih singkat dan langsung ke poin utama, serta gunakan kata penghubung yang tepat untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren dan alami.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget specific items I need. Also, I often get distracted by unnecessary products like skincare. Therefore, the list helps me prioritize essential items before considering others.

제안: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan ada beberapa kalimat yang tidak lengkap atau kurang tepat. Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan gunakan kosakata yang sesuai untuk menjelaskan alasan mengapa membuat daftar kerja efektif bagi Anda.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it works well. It helps me stay organized and efficient. Since I am a coaster, I need to buy specific products carefully to be economical.

제안: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa yang mengganggu pemahaman. Cobalah untuk menyusun kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan jelas, serta gunakan alasan yang logis dan spesifik mengapa beberapa orang tidak suka membuat daftar.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and feel confident about what they want to buy. They may find lists unnecessary or boring.

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik dan jelas, namun ada beberapa pengulangan dan kalimat yang kurang efektif. Cobalah untuk membuat jawaban lebih singkat dan gunakan kosakata yang tepat untuk menjelaskan alasan Anda lebih suka menggunakan ponsel.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. I always carry my phone, so I won't forget the list. Also, unlike paper, it won't get damaged or lost easily.

× sometimes I've always forgot what's the specific product that I want to buy

✓ sometimes I've always forgotten what the specific product that I want to buy is

The verb 'forgot' is the simple past tense, but with 'I've always' (present perfect), the past participle 'forgotten' should be used. Also, the sentence structure requires 'what the specific product that I want to buy is' for clarity.

× I've always integrated by a lot of things like skin care, unnecessary things

✓ I've always been distracted by a lot of things like skin care, unnecessary things

The verb 'integrated' is incorrect in this context. The correct phrase is 'distracted by' to express being sidetracked by other things.

× what is the prioritized thing that I have to buy before those kind of things that maybe I can buy in another time

✓ what is the prioritized thing that I have to buy before those kinds of things that maybe I can buy another time

The phrase 'those kind of things' should be pluralized to 'those kinds of things' to agree in number. Also, 'in another time' is better expressed as 'another time' without 'in'.

× I do make a list for my work and it is working

✓ I do make a list for my work and it works

The phrase 'it is working' is awkward here; 'it works' is the correct simple present tense to express that the list is effective.

× Since I am a coaster, I need to see what is the specific product that I have to buy and I have to be much more. Economical.

✓ Since I am a customer, I need to see what the specific product is that I have to buy and I have to be much more economical.

The word 'coaster' is incorrect; likely intended 'customer'. Also, 'much more economical' should not be separated by a period.

× Maybe because it's just their habit to don't mix on this

✓ Maybe because it's just their habit not to get involved in this

The phrase 'to don't mix on this' is incorrect. The correct form is 'not to get involved in this' or 'not to mix in this'.

× they know what they want to buy. So I feel like people doesn't really like to make some it's it is very fun

✓ they know what they want to buy. So I feel like people don't really like to make lists; it's not very fun

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' not 'doesn't'. Also, the sentence is fragmented and unclear; 'make some it's it is very fun' is corrected to 'make lists; it's not very fun' for clarity.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's much easier, rather than write it on a paper

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's much easier than writing it on paper

The phrase 'rather than write it on a paper' is awkward; 'much easier than writing it on paper' is the correct comparative structure. Also, 'paper' is uncountable and does not need 'a'.

× sometimes I've always forgot to bring that paper

✓ sometimes I've always forgotten to bring that paper

As before, 'forgot' should be the past participle 'forgotten' when used with 'I've always' (present perfect).

× or maybe the paper gonna get ripped or get wet

✓ or maybe the paper is going to get ripped or get wet

'gonna' is informal and incorrect in formal speech; it should be 'is going to'. Also, 'get ripped or get wet' is acceptable but could be improved to 'gets ripped or gets wet' for parallelism.

× Because I've always bring my phone every time and everywhere

✓ Because I always bring my phone everywhere all the time

'I've always bring' is incorrect; 'I always bring' is correct. Also, 'every time and everywhere' is better expressed as 'everywhere all the time'.