List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在较多的语气词和重复，影响流畅性。建议减少填充词，使用更自然简洁的表达，同时注意语法，如"make at least"应为"make a list"。

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list, especially when I need to buy many items. For example, last weekend I prepared a list to make sure I didn't forget any essential spices.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，如"I remake a working list"应为"I make a work list"，且表达不够连贯。建议加强语法准确性，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I make a work list, especially when I have a tight schedule. It helps me stay organized and work efficiently. Besides, I like to include specific details to remind myself of important tasks.

제안: 回答中表达不完整且有语法错误，如"need a lot of mental efforts"应为"needs a lot of mental effort"。建议完善句子结构，避免句子未完成，使用更准确的词汇。

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because it takes time and mental effort. Also, plans often change unexpectedly, so they feel lists are not very useful.

제안: 回答中表达不清晰，部分词汇使用不当，如"instant scenes"和"delete all AT items"。建议使用更准确的词汇和表达，增强逻辑连贯性。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can easily add or delete items. However, for urgent and important tasks, I write them on paper as a physical reminder.

× I will make at least, especially when I need to buy tons of things, uh, to ensure I won't forget some essential items.

✓ I make one at least, especially when I need to buy tons of things, uh, to ensure I won't forget some essential items.

这里描述的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时而不是将来时。将来时“will make”不符合语境。建议用一般现在时“make”。

× to avoid, uh, forgotten some, uh, some spices.

✓ to avoid, uh, forgetting some, uh, some spices.

动词avoid后应接动名词形式，不能用过去分词forgotten。应改为forgetting。

× Yes, I remake a working list especially when I have time schedule to ensure I won't forget some essential items.

✓ Yes, I remake a working list especially when I have a time schedule to ensure I won't forget some essential items.

“time schedule”前缺少冠词“a”，属于冠词错误，应加上。

× This help me to stay organized and work efficiently.

✓ This helps me to stay organized and work efficiently.

主语This是单数，谓语动词help应加-s，保持主谓一致。

× Besides that, I prefer to write on some specific details about the working.

✓ Besides that, I prefer to write some specific details about the work.

动词write后不应加介词on，且“the working”用词不当，应改为“the work”。

× making a list is really time consuming and need a lot of mental efforts so that people don't want to waste their time on it.

✓ making a list is really time consuming and needs a lot of mental effort so that people don't want to waste their time on it.

主语making a list是单数，谓语动词need应加-s，且effort不可数，去掉复数形式。

× You know the the plan always change spontaneously or.

✓ You know the plan always changes spontaneously.

主语the plan是单数，谓语动词change应加-s，且句子末尾“or”多余，应删除。

× I prefer to write some instant scenes on my phone which can help me a lot because I can delete all AT items anytime.

✓ I prefer to write some instant notes on my phone which can help me a lot because I can delete all the items anytime.

“instant scenes”用词不当，应改为“instant notes”；“AT items”不明确，去掉“AT”；“delete all items anytime”前应加定冠词the。

× However, I usually write some urgent and essential things on paper which can remind me physical.

✓ However, I usually write some urgent and essential things on paper which can remind me physically.

“remind”后应接副词修饰，不能用形容词“physical”，应改为副词“physically”。