List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid informal contractions like 'cause' in formal speaking tests. Also, aim to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly, and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember the items I need to buy. Additionally, it prevents me from making impulsive purchases, which saves money.

제안: There are some grammatical errors and repetitions in your answer. Try to speak more fluently and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: Yes, I prefer to make a list whenever I am working because it helps me remember the tasks I need to complete during the day.

제안: Avoid using unnecessary words like 'Phil' and 'humans' which sound unnatural. Use more natural expressions and linking words to improve fluency and coherence.

예시: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they believe their memory is sharp enough to remember everything without writing it down.

제안: There are repetitions and redundancy in your answer. Try to avoid repeating words and be more concise. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Nowadays, I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because it is convenient to carry it anywhere. Therefore, I usually use the notepad app to keep my lists organized.

× Yes, I always prefers to make a list when I whenever I am working because it helps me to remember the things or tasks that I I have to do on the day.

✓ Yes, I always prefer to make a list whenever I am working because it helps me to remember the things or tasks that I have to do on the day.

The verb 'prefer' should be in the base form 'prefer' after the subject 'I' because 'I' takes the base form without 's' in the present tense. Also, the sentence had a redundant 'I' and 'whenever' placement was corrected for clarity.