List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
Sure, I do make a list when I shop. It consists of all the important things and it helps me keep my shopping organized and does not let me spend more than required. So a list very much helps me to go through the shopping quickly.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
Yes, I do make A to do list every day so as to fulfill my daily important tasks. Moreover, I feel a sense of achievement when I complete those tasks. For example, I'll list my workout, my hydration and my study plans for the day.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
I would say the people who don't like making lists are probably the ones who haven't tried making one and it is mostly because of the laziness because it doesn't take much time and they haven't have that feeling of achievement that we get after ticking off our daily tasks. So.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
I would always prefer making a list on paper because it is the more authentic way of making a list and my father also does the same so I really admire whatever he does. That is why I always would choose paper over a mobile phone.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 80.0제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and keep your response concise. Instead of repeating the idea of a list helping you, focus on one strong reason and add a linking word to improve coherence.
예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and avoid unnecessary expenses, which makes the process quicker and more efficient.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 85.0제안: Good use of examples and linking words. To improve, try to correct minor grammar errors and use more natural phrasing, such as 'a to-do list' instead of 'A to do list'.
예시: Yes, I make a to-do list every day to complete my important tasks. This helps me stay focused, and I feel a sense of achievement when I tick off items like my workout, hydration, and study plans.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 70.0제안: Your answer is a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid ending abruptly and correct grammar mistakes like 'haven't have'.
예시: Some people dislike making lists because they may not have tried it yet. Additionally, they might feel lazy since it takes little time, and they miss out on the satisfaction of completing tasks.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 75.0제안: Your answer is personal and clear, but try to avoid informal phrases like 'whatever he does' and improve sentence flow with linking words. Also, keep sentences concise and avoid redundancy.
예시: I prefer making lists on paper because it feels more authentic, and since my father does the same, I admire his habit. Therefore, I choose paper over my phone for making lists.
문법
× I would say the people who don't like making lists are probably the ones who haven't tried making one and it is mostly because of the laziness because it doesn't take much time and they haven't have that feeling of achievement that we get after ticking off our daily tasks.
✓ I would say the people who don't like making lists are probably the ones who haven't tried making one and it is mostly because of laziness because it doesn't take much time and they haven't had that feeling of achievement that we get after ticking off our daily tasks.
The phrase 'haven't have' is incorrect because 'haven't' is already an auxiliary verb and should be followed by the past participle 'had'. The correct form is 'haven't had'. This is a present perfect tense issue where the auxiliary verb and past participle must be used correctly to indicate an action that has not occurred up to now.
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