List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
Uh, yeah, sometimes, uh, but I always just, uh, get through my mind that I should buy what I should buy before I go to the, the store and we are not, I'm not just often listing my things out, uh, unless that the things is really, really important for me.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
Well, I'm a student, I guess you are asking me about the learning things. So when I was learning, uh, I sometimes make the schedule and timeline to just list out all the things I have to do with. So it is just to make me more predictable about my time. That's a great way to save your time.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
Well, I guess people who dislike to make a list, uh, that is because they are just want to be casual and uh, they don't want to be stalked by the timeline or schedule, so they only just want to do whatever he likes at any time.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
Where I where I prefer to make a list on my phone because, uh, when I write down my list, uh, the paper that I might get lost in my paper. But as the list is on my phone, I will take take with my phone all together every time. So I think listing on the form is more convenient for me.
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총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中有较多的语气词和重复，影响流畅性。建议减少填充词，回答更简洁自然，并且直接回应问题。可以用一两句清晰表达是否做购物清单，并给出简短理由。
예시: Yes, I sometimes make a shopping list, especially when I need to buy important items. It helps me remember what to buy and saves time in the store.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答结构较好，但语言表达不够自然，有语法错误和重复。建议使用更准确的表达，减少语气词，逻辑更清晰。
예시: As a student, I sometimes make schedules and timelines to list all my tasks. This helps me manage my time better and improve my efficiency.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中有语法错误和不自然表达，且有重复。建议用更准确的句式表达原因，避免使用“stalked”这种不合适的词汇。
예시: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be flexible and not restricted by schedules. They like to do things spontaneously.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地说明偏好，并给出具体原因，避免重复。
예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I won't lose my list. It's more convenient than using paper.
문법
× unless that the things is really, really important for me.
✓ unless the things are really, really important for me.
这里'the things'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'，而不是单数'is'。主谓一致错误。
× I sometimes make the schedule and timeline to just list out all the things I have to do with.
✓ I sometimes make the schedule and timeline to just list out all the things I have to do.
短语'do with'在这里多余且不正确，应该去掉。
× Well, I guess people who dislike to make a list, uh, that is because they are just want to be casual and uh, they don't want to be stalked by the timeline or schedule, so they only just want to do whatever he likes at any time.
✓ Well, I guess people who dislike making a list, uh, that is because they just want to be casual and uh, they don't want to be stalked by the timeline or schedule, so they only just want to do whatever they like at any time.
动词'dislike'后应接动名词'making'，而不是不定式'to make'。此外，代词'he'应与前文复数主语'people'保持一致，改为'they'。
× Where I where I prefer to make a list on my phone because, uh, when I write down my list, uh, the paper that I might get lost in my paper.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because, uh, when I write down my list on paper, I might lose the paper.
句首多余的'Where I where I'应删除。'write down my list'后应加介词'on'表示在纸上写。'get lost in my paper'表达不当，应改为'lost the paper'表示丢失纸张。
× But as the list is on my phone, I will take take with my phone all together every time.
✓ But as the list is on my phone, I will take it with my phone altogether every time.
动词'take'后缺少宾语，需加代词'it'指代'list'。'all together'应写作'adverb'形式'all together'或合成词'altogether'，此处用'adverb'形式更合适。
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