List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
Personally, I do not make a list when I shop because I already have the things that I want to buy in my head. But my grandmother normally writes a whole list for the things she wants to buy when I go out to get groceries. This is so that she can remember what she wants to get.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
Yes I do. I believe that making a list for my work is quite important because I get to write down my goals and my progress. This helps me track what I have done and helps me not to confuse my work.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
In my opinion, some people do not like making list is because list shows all the things that you have to do. So some people see as a burden and it might be overwhelming to them. But I personally think that we should not be avoiding these goals and you should face it face to face.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
I would prefer to make a list on my phone. This is because it is way more convenient. You don't need to have a pen, All you have to do is type in what you want and you don't run the risk of losing your list because it is in your phone. If it's on paper, you might lose it anywhere.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 75.0제안: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid redundancy. For example, you can combine ideas and use linking words to make your answer flow better. Also, try to add a concluding sentence to wrap up your answer naturally.
예시: I usually don't make a list when I shop because I remember what I need. However, my grandmother prefers to write a list to help her remember everything she wants to buy.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 80.0제안: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using linking words and varying sentence structures. Also, try to avoid repeating similar ideas and be more specific about how the list helps you.
예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it allows me to set clear goals and monitor my progress. Consequently, I can stay organized and avoid confusion about my tasks.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 70.0제안: Focus on grammatical accuracy and clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating the word "list" too often and try to rephrase sentences for better flow.
예시: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they reveal all the tasks they need to complete, which can feel overwhelming. However, I believe it's important to face these challenges directly rather than avoid them.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 78.0제안: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence variety. Use linking words to connect your points and make your answer more coherent. Also, watch out for small grammar mistakes like capitalisation.
예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient; I can type quickly without needing a pen, and I won't lose the list as it's saved digitally. In contrast, paper lists can easily get lost.
문법
× In my opinion, some people do not like making list is because list shows all the things that you have to do.
✓ In my opinion, some people do not like making lists because lists show all the things that you have to do.
The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general concept of multiple lists. Also, the verb 'shows' should be 'show' to agree with the plural subject 'lists'. This correction ensures subject-verb agreement and correct plural usage.
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