List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat natural but contains some awkward phrases and grammatical errors, such as "make mental note" and "make my mother disappointed." Try to use clearer and more standard expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: It depends on what I'm shopping for. For example, when I buy clothes or plan study tours, I usually remember the items mentally. However, when I shop for groceries for my mother, I always make a list on my phone to avoid forgetting anything and disappointing her.

제안: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences. Avoid fragments like "So." and improve sentence structure. Use linking words like "however" or "but" to connect ideas. Also, be more specific and clear in your explanation.

예시: I used to make study lists to organize my daily learning tasks. At first, it was easy to plan what I wanted to complete and estimate the time needed. However, I found it difficult to stick to the schedule, and I often missed deadlines, which was frustrating.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors and incomplete thoughts. Avoid confusing phrases like "booking lists" and "stick to the blend." Make sure to complete your sentences and use appropriate vocabulary. Use linking words to contrast ideas clearly.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it creates pressure and stress. While lists help organize tasks and deadlines, others prefer flexibility and like to go with the flow, so strict schedules can feel annoying and frustrating to them.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains awkward phrases like "calibrate your list" and "expect things come UPS." Try to use more natural expressions such as "edit your list anytime" and "unexpected things happen." Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence flow with linking words.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and flexible. I can easily edit my list anytime, especially when unexpected things come up. Additionally, phone apps offer various tools and colors to organize and decorate my lists.

× I used to try my best to making a list, to be specific study list.

✓ I used to try my best to make a list, to be specific a study list.

After 'try to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'making' should be corrected to 'make'.

× I planned all the things that I would learn in a day.

✓ I planned all the things that I would learn in a day.

This sentence is grammatically correct with respect to singular and plural usage; no correction needed.

× I used to try my best to making a list, to be specific study list.

✓ I used to try my best to make a list, to be specific a study list.

The verb 'try' is followed by 'to' plus the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. So 'making' should be 'make'.

× Whenever I go shopping to buy the things I want like study tours or new clothes, I can instantly make mental note which means that I just bag them in my mind.

✓ Whenever I go shopping to buy things I want, like study tours or new clothes, I can instantly make a mental note, which means that I just bag them in my mind.

The phrase 'make mental note' requires the article 'a' before 'mental note'. Also, commas are needed to separate clauses and items in a list for clarity.

× But whenever it comes to buying food or ingredients from my mother, I always carefully make a note on my phone in order to not forget anything and make my mother disappointed.

✓ But whenever it comes to buying food or ingredients for my mother, I always carefully make a note on my phone in order not to forget anything and not to disappoint my mother.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect here; 'for' is appropriate when buying something on behalf of someone. Also, 'in order to not forget' should be 'in order not to forget' and 'make my mother disappointed' should be 'not to disappoint my mother' for correct verb usage.

× I kept missing the schedule which makes me very annoyed.

✓ I kept missing the schedule which made me very annoyed.

The main clause is in past tense ('kept missing'), so the relative clause should also be in past tense ('made') to maintain tense consistency.

× I believe that it is due to the pressure and stress that booking lists could bring.

✓ I believe that it is due to the pressure and stress that making lists could bring.

The word 'booking' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'making' when referring to creating lists.

× But for some people who refer to be flexibility, flex, flexible and go with flow, it is very annoying to stick to the blend and it is even more frustrating whenever you.

✓ But for some people who prefer to be flexible, to flex, and to go with the flow, it is very annoying to stick to the plan and it is even more frustrating whenever you do.

The phrase 'refer to be flexibility' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to be flexible'. 'Go with flow' needs the article 'the' to be 'go with the flow'. 'Stick to the blend' is incorrect; 'plan' fits better. The sentence is incomplete and needs 'do' at the end for clarity.

× Frankly speaking, I would prefer to take note on my phone rather than take note on paper.

✓ Frankly speaking, I would prefer to take notes on my phone rather than take notes on paper.

The phrase 'take note on' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'take notes on'. Also, 'note' should be plural as it refers to multiple items.

× Moreover, it offers a various tools with scores of colors to like adorn your list.

✓ Moreover, it offers various tools with scores of colors to adorn your list.

The article 'a' should not be used before 'various' because 'various' already implies plurality. Also, 'to like adorn' is incorrect; it should be 'to adorn'.