List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현을 개선하세요. 예를 들어, 'I like to making a list' 대신 'I like to make a list'를 사용하고, 문장을 더 자연스럽게 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: Yes, I like to make a list when I go shopping because it helps me buy the products I want and avoid buying unnecessary items.

제안: 문장 구조와 문법을 명확히 하세요. 'makes me to think' 대신 'helps me think'를 사용하고, 중복된 표현을 줄여 문장을 간결하게 만드세요.

예시: Yes, I make a list when I work because it helps me think about the tasks I need to complete and improves the quality of my work.

제안: 의미 전달이 명확하지 않으므로 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다. 'press our work to do' 대신 'make us feel pressured'와 같은 표현을 사용하세요.

예시: I think some people find making lists uncomfortable because it reminds them of their tasks and can make them feel pressured to complete their work.

제안: 'If I ride with my hand'는 의미가 불분명하므로 명확한 표현으로 바꾸고, 비교 구문을 자연스럽게 만드세요. 예를 들어, 'writing by hand'를 사용하세요.

예시: I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because writing by hand helps me remember things more clearly and for a longer time.

× Yes, I like to making a list when I'm shopping.

✓ Yes, I like to make a list when I'm shopping.

'Like to making' is incorrect because after 'like to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. The correct form is 'like to make'.

× Making list help me to buy product that I wanted to buy and help me to not buy the other.

✓ Making a list helps me to buy products that I want to buy and helps me not to buy others.

'Making list' should be 'Making a list' (singular with article). 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject. 'product' should be plural 'products' to match context. 'wanted' should be present tense 'want' to match ongoing action. 'help me to not buy the other' is awkward; better as 'helps me not to buy others'. Subject-verb agreement and plural forms are corrected.

× Yes, I make a list when I'm working. Making list for my work makes me to think about the things that I have to do and it is it can increase my work quality better.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I'm working. Making a list for my work makes me think about the things that I have to do and it can improve the quality of my work.

'Making list' should be 'Making a list' (singular with article). 'makes me to think' should be 'makes me think' (no 'to' after 'makes'). 'it is it can increase my work quality better' is incorrect; corrected to 'it can improve the quality of my work' for clarity and correctness.

× I think making this can be feel uncomfortable things.

✓ I think making this can feel uncomfortable.

'can be feel' is incorrect; modal verb 'can' should be followed by base verb 'feel'. 'uncomfortable things' is awkward; 'uncomfortable' alone suffices as an adjective describing the experience.

× It tells us to to do what we have to do, but it can press our work to do.

✓ It tells us what we have to do, but it can pressure us to work.

'tells us to to do' has repeated 'to'. 'press our work to do' is incorrect; 'pressure us to work' is the correct expression. Pronouns and verb usage corrected for clarity.

× I prefer to make a list on paper than my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone.

'prefer ... than' is incorrect; the correct comparative structure is 'prefer ... rather than ...'. Also, 'on my phone' needs the preposition 'on' for parallel structure.

× If I ride with my hand, at least it could help me to remember more clear and longer.

✓ If I write with my hand, at least it could help me remember more clearly and for longer.

'ride with my hand' is incorrect; should be 'write with my hand'. 'help me to remember more clear and longer' should be 'help me remember more clearly and for longer' to use correct adverb forms and expressions.