List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'I just' and try to use linking words to improve coherence. Also, try to provide a reason or example to enrich your answer.

예시: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what catches my eye.

제안: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but it can be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, watch for tense consistency and sentence structure to sound more natural.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it works well because it helps me organize my tasks and schedule them properly, so I don't miss anything important.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but could be more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating similar phrases. Also, correct grammar such as 'because' instead of 'because they' and 'a to-do list' instead of 'A to do list'.

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they have good memories and can remember their tasks without writing them down.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words. For example, 'instead of' instead of 'instead on', and clarify 'put ticket' with a better phrase. Also, try to combine sentences for better flow.

예시: I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because writing things down helps my memory, and I enjoy the satisfaction of ticking off completed tasks.

× No I don't make a list when I shop. I just randomly buy things that I like when I see them then I will just buy them.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I shop. I just randomly buy things that I like when I see them, then I just buy them.

The phrase 'then I will just buy them' incorrectly uses the future tense 'will' in a context describing habitual actions. The present simple tense 'I just buy them' is appropriate here to indicate regular behavior.

× I think it works well because it helped me to organize the things that I need to do and to schedule them properly and in that way I won't miss any task or thing that I supposed to do.

✓ I think it works well because it helps me to organize the things that I need to do and to schedule them properly, and in that way I won't miss any task or thing that I am supposed to do.

The verb 'helped' is in the past tense, which conflicts with the present tense context of 'I think it works well.' It should be 'helps' to maintain present tense consistency. Also, 'that I supposed to do' is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present perfect passive structure 'that I am supposed to do.'

× I think those people who don't like making lists because they have good memories and they don't need to make A to do list to organize their things and schedule their works, they can just remember them without writing them down.

✓ I think those people who don't like making lists have good memories and don't need to make a to-do list to organize their things and schedule their work; they can just remember them without writing them down.

The original sentence is a run-on with incorrect conjunction use and article errors. The phrase 'because they have good memories' should be connected properly without 'because' after 'I think.' Also, 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list' with correct article and hyphenation. 'Schedule their works' is incorrect; 'work' is uncountable here. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I prefer to make a list on paper instead on my phone because I like writing things down and it helps my memory as well.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper instead of on my phone because I like writing things down and it helps my memory as well.

The phrase 'instead on my phone' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'instead of' to indicate preference between two options.

× Usually I would just put ticket for the thing that I have done.

✓ Usually, I would just put a tick for the things that I have done.

The word 'ticket' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'tick' meaning a check mark. Also, 'the thing' should be plural 'the things' to match the context of multiple tasks completed.