List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, correct grammar mistakes like 'it happened' to 'it happens' and 'make list 2' is unclear. Keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy. Otherwise, I might purchase unnecessary items. Therefore, making a list saves both time and money.

제안: Your answer has many fillers like 'uh' and some unclear phrases such as 'what happened that'. Try to speak more fluently and use clear, direct sentences. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas logically. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because without it, I might get distracted by unimportant tasks. Making a list helps me focus and complete important tasks on time.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains many hesitations. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repeating phrases like 'I think they think'. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'so' to make your answer coherent. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they have good memories and prefer to remember tasks themselves. They may also feel that making lists wastes time, so they choose to work without them.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and lacks linking words. Try to use connectors like 'because' and 'so' properly, and correct phrases like 'reminds me task' to 'reminds me of tasks'. Also, avoid ending sentences abruptly and keep your answer clear and concise.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and digital. I can set reminders, so I don't forget my tasks, which helps me complete them on time.

× And also sometimes it happened that I buy things which are unnecessary, so I just make a list.

✓ And also sometimes it happens that I buy things which are unnecessary, so I just make a list.

The sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'happened' while the context is about habitual actions, which require the present tense 'happens'. Use present tense for habitual or repeated actions.

× So I just make list 2.

✓ So I just make list 2.

The phrase 'make list 2' is unclear and likely a typographical error. Possibly intended as 'make a list too'. The correction is to add the article 'a' and replace '2' with 'too' to indicate 'also'.

× I tend to make unnecessary things.

✓ I tend to do unnecessary things.

The verb 'make' is incorrectly used with 'things' in this context. The correct verb is 'do' when referring to actions or tasks. 'Make' is used for creating objects.

× I can put reminder so it reminds me task on time and I can complete my task very easily and convenient so phone over.

✓ I can set reminders so it reminds me of tasks on time and I can complete my tasks very easily and conveniently, so I prefer phone over paper.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'put reminder' should be 'set reminders'; missing preposition 'of' after 'reminds me'; 'task' should be plural 'tasks'; 'convenient' should be adverb 'conveniently'; and the phrase 'so phone over' is incomplete and unclear, corrected to 'so I prefer phone over paper' for clarity.