List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh sử dụng những cụm từ không chính xác hoặc không liên quan như "golden fish spring". Hãy tập trung vào việc trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và tiếng ừ, ờ.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget things easily. Making a list helps me remember all the items I need to buy and saves me time.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "all entire the the list". Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

예시: Yes, I make a list of tasks I need to complete. It helps me stay organized and ensures that I finish everything on time, so it works well for me.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh dùng những từ không chính xác như "ignore annoyed" và diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách logic hơn.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they have good memories and prefer to remember tasks themselves. Also, they may feel that making lists wastes time and can be annoying.

제안: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng nhiều tiếng ừ, ờ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp trong câu. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh mâu thuẫn như "I cannot take my device to everywhere". Hãy tập trung vào việc trình bày lý do một cách logic và mạch lạc.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and easy to carry everywhere. Using my phone helps me organize my notes efficiently.

× I always list down the many works that I need to finish and after that I use it to make sure that I complete all entire the the list and I think it's effective for me.

✓ I always list down the many tasks that I need to finish and after that I use it to make sure that I complete the entire list and I think it's effective for me.

The word 'works' is incorrectly used as a plural noun here; 'work' is generally uncountable or 'tasks' should be used for countable items. Also, 'all entire the the list' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'the entire list'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer using my phone as, uh, my, uh, list notes because, uh, it the IT is the most convenient way for me to, uh, list down my words and I cannot take my device, uh, to everywhere and it's very convenient for me.

✓ I prefer using my phone as my list notes because it is the most convenient way for me to list down my words and I can take my device everywhere; it's very convenient for me.

The phrase 'I cannot take my device, uh, to everywhere' is incorrect; 'to everywhere' should be 'everywhere' without 'to'. Also, 'it the IT' is a mistake and should be corrected to 'it is'. These corrections fix prepositional errors and improve sentence clarity.

× I think many people have strong memories so that they can just do it by them then their memory and beside that they think that making lists is a waste time so that they feel ignore annoyed about them.

✓ I think many people have strong memories so they can just do it by themselves and besides that, they think that making lists is a waste of time so they feel annoyed by it.

The phrase 'do it by them then their memory' is incorrect; it should be 'do it by themselves'. Also, 'beside that' should be 'besides that', and 'waste time' should be 'waste of time'. 'Feel ignore annoyed about them' is incorrect and should be 'feel annoyed by it'. These corrections address pronoun misuse and improve overall sentence structure.