List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构较为混乱。建议注意时态和句子连贯性，避免重复表达。

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me save time and ensures I buy everything I need without forgetting anything.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用更准确的时态和词汇，并使句子更流畅。

예시: I always make a list at work because it helps me stay organized and complete my tasks efficiently throughout the day.

제안: 表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误。建议简化句子结构，明确表达原因，并使用恰当的连接词。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it stressful to follow a fixed plan, and they prefer to do things spontaneously.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达重复，建议简化句子，使用准确的词汇，并保持句子连贯。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because there are many useful apps that help me organize my tasks and track my progress easily.

× when I shopping I will very prepare to buy anything that I want

✓ when I am shopping I will be very prepared to buy anything that I want

这里缺少动词be的正确形式，动词shopping前应有am构成现在进行时，且prepare应为形容词prepared，表示状态。

× when I shopping I will very prepare to buy anything that I want

✓ when I am shopping I will be very prepared to buy anything that I want

动词shopping前应加am，构成现在进行时；prepare应改为形容词prepared，表示准备好的状态。

× I always make a list in my work

✓ I always make a list at my work

表示在某个工作场所时，通常用介词at而非in。

× makes me become more efficiency and responsibility

✓ makes me become more efficient and responsible

efficiency和responsibility是名词，句中应使用形容词efficient和responsible来修饰主语。

× makes me become more efficiency and responsibility

✓ makes me become more efficient and responsible

此处需要形容词形式来描述人的状态，故应使用efficient和responsible。

× Because I think some people think make a list is a pleasure things or they are stressful to follow the list in a day or in the work.

✓ Because I think some people think making a list is a pleasant thing or they feel stressed to follow the list during the day or at work.

make a list应改为making a list，作动名词；pleasure things应为pleasant thing；stressful用法不当，应改为feel stressed；介词in the work应为at work。

× Because I think some people think make a list is a pleasure things

✓ Because I think some people think making a list is a pleasant thing

动词think后接动名词making表示动作；pleasure things应为pleasant thing，形容词修饰单数名词。

× stressful to follow the list in a day or in the work

✓ stressed to follow the list during the day or at work

in a day应改为during the day，表示在一天中；in the work应改为at work，表示在工作场所。

× They also like doing something by themselves that they want to do at the time.

✓ They also like doing something by themselves that they want to do at that time.

at the time应为at that time，指特定时间。

× I prefer make a list on my phone

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone

动词prefer后应接不定式to make，而非直接接动词原形。

× there are many list applications in my phone

✓ there are many list applications on my phone

phone上应使用介词on；list applications复数形式正确。

× there are many list applications in my phone

✓ there are many list applications on my phone

表示设备上应用程序，介词应为on而非in。

× it's a good application to make a list in the beginning of the day

✓ it's a good application to make a list at the beginning of the day

固定搭配为at the beginning of the day，表示一天开始时。

× it's easy to see how we target, target and go on.

✓ it's easy to see how we set targets and go on.

原句表达不清，target作为动词用法不当，应改为set targets，且重复单词应删除。