List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more fluent and natural by reducing filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Also, use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons or examples. For instance, explain how making a list helps you avoid forgetting items and saves time during shopping.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget things easily. For example, when I go to the supermarket, having a list helps me remember all the items I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

제안: Improve sentence structure and grammar to make your answer clearer. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, provide a specific example of how making a list helps you manage your work effectively.

예시: Yes, I use lists to schedule at least four hours of work each day. This method provides clarity about what tasks I need to complete and helps me stay focused on achieving my goals efficiently.

제안: Avoid making assumptions like calling people 'lazy'. Instead, explain reasons more respectfully and clearly. Also, clarify what 'ABC schedule people' means or use a more common explanation. Use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Some people may dislike making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously or find lists restrictive. For example, they might feel that lists limit their flexibility and creativity during the day.

제안: Try to reduce filler words and improve sentence flow. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons why using a phone is more convenient than paper. Also, correct grammar mistakes like 'making list' to 'making lists'.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. This way, I can easily update or reschedule tasks anytime, which is more convenient than using paper lists.

× Sometimes I used to list, uh, something I want to shop from uh, supermarkets or malls because uh, I am umm, a person that uh, forgot everything easily.

✓ Sometimes I used to list, uh, something I wanted to shop from uh, supermarkets or malls because uh, I am umm, a person that uh, forgets everything easily.

The phrase 'I want' should be in past tense 'I wanted' to match 'used to', which refers to past habits. Also, 'forgot' should be 'forgets' because it describes a general characteristic in present tense.

× Uh, that's why I am using listing method for uh, remembering those things I need.

✓ Uh, that's why I am using the listing method for uh, remembering those things I need.

The noun phrase 'listing method' requires the definite article 'the' to specify the method being used.

× Definitely it is a good method to, uh, scheduling least 4 hour, uh, work because it's make, uh, a clarity for our work, what, what we can do, how we can do and how to, uh, come to our goal.

✓ Definitely it is a good method to, uh, schedule at least 4 hours, uh, work because it makes, uh, clarity for our work: what we can do, how we can do it, and how to, uh, come to our goal.

The verb after 'to' should be in base form 'schedule' not 'scheduling'. 'Least 4 hour' should be 'at least 4 hours' for correct quantifier and plural noun. 'It's make' should be 'it makes' for subject-verb agreement and present tense. Added punctuation and corrected sentence structure for clarity.

× I think they are lazy peoples.

✓ I think they are lazy people.

The word 'people' is already plural; 'peoples' is incorrect in this context.

× That's why they are don't like, uh, making list and uh, maybe they are uh, ABC schedule people.

✓ That's why they don't like, uh, making lists and, uh, maybe they are, uh, ABC schedule people.

The auxiliary verb 'are' is incorrectly used with 'don't'. It should be 'they don't like'. Also, 'making list' should be plural 'making lists' to be grammatically correct.

× That's why they can, can't able to, uh, work based on the list.

✓ That's why they can't work based on the list.

The phrase 'can, can't able to' is incorrect. 'Can't' already expresses inability, so 'able to' is redundant and should be removed.

× Definitely, I will prefer my phone for making list because, uh, I always carry my phone with me everywhere I go.

✓ Definitely, I will prefer my phone for making lists because, uh, I always carry my phone with me everywhere I go.

'Making list' should be plural 'making lists' to be grammatically correct.

× So it's more convenient than using paper. We can, uh, every time we can, uh, check my phone for updations and rescheduling, etcetera.

✓ So it's more convenient than using paper. We can, uh, check my phone every time for updates and rescheduling, etcetera.

The phrase 'We can, uh, every time we can, uh, check' is redundant and awkward; simplified to 'We can check my phone every time'. 'Updations' is incorrect; the correct word is 'updates'.