List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够自然，且缺少连接词使内容显得断裂。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I have a good memory, so I can easily remember the important items I need to buy.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和口语填充词，影响流畅度。建议避免使用口语填充词，改进句子结构，使表达更清晰。

예시: Yes, I often make lists for my work, but sometimes I find it hard to complete all the tasks on the list.

제안: 句子结构混乱，表达不清晰，且用词不准确。建议简化句子，明确表达原因，并避免使用医学术语。

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel stressed when they can't finish everything on the list.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和句子不完整，缺少连接词。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper because it's very convenient; I can check my lists anytime by simply opening my phone.

× No, I never make list when I shop.

✓ No, I never make a list when I shop.

这里的“list”是可数名词，表示“清单”，需要加冠词“a”。缺少冠词导致语法错误。建议在单数可数名词前加适当冠词。该问题属于单复数问题。该错误对应语法问题类型ID为1。

× I frequently make a list to uh for my work.

✓ I frequently make a list for my work.

句中“to uh”是多余且不正确的表达，应删除。此处无明显单复数错误，但删除多余词语使句子更通顺。该句无符合列表中语法错误类型，故不计入。

× However, I find it is difficult to finish all of them.

✓ However, I find it difficult to finish all of them.

“find it difficult”是固定搭配，后面不需要加“is”。原句中“it is difficult”结构重复。该错误属于句子结构错误，但不在指定列表中，故不计入。

× I guess the reason is that making at least when they are working may lead to anxiety disorder because many people are unable to finish all of them.

✓ I guess the reason is that making at least lists when they are working may lead to anxiety disorder because many people are unable to finish all of them.

原句中“making at least”缺少宾语，应为“making at least lists”。“at least”用法不当，可能是想表达“making lists at least”。这里主要是词语搭配和句子结构问题，属于句子结构错误，不在列表中，故不计入。

× Instead of making lists on paper, I prefer recording them on my.

✓ Instead of making lists on paper, I prefer recording them on my phone.

句子末尾缺少名词“phone”，导致句子不完整。该错误属于句子结构错误，不在列表中，故不计入。