List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid filler words like 'Umm'. Also, make your sentences more concise and coherent by using linking words properly.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list before going to the supermarket because it helps me shop more efficiently. Moreover, it reduces the time I spend deciding what to buy in front of the shelves.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use consistent verb tenses and clearer sentence structures. Adding linking words will improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I make a to-do list every day before starting my tasks because it helps me clearly understand which jobs I need to complete. As a result, my day becomes more productive.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains confusing phrases. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use appropriate vocabulary. Also, provide specific reasons and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel overwhelmed when they see many tasks written down. Additionally, they prefer to remember their tasks mentally rather than writing them down.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and awkward expressions. Use correct prepositions and clearer sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy and improve coherence with linking words.

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because I can stick them on my laptop for easy reference. However, I avoid using my phone for lists since checking tasks there can be distracting.

× Yes, I make a shopping list before I go to the supermarket because it make my shopping more efficiently.

✓ Yes, I make a shopping list before I go to the supermarket because it makes my shopping more efficient.

The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' to agree in number. Also, 'efficiently' is an adverb, but here an adjective 'efficient' is needed to describe 'shopping'.

× Umm. In addition, doing this can help me can reduce time in front of the shelves with.

✓ Umm. In addition, doing this can help me reduce the time I spend in front of the shelves.

The phrase 'help me can reduce' is incorrect; 'help me reduce' is correct. Also, 'in front of the shelves with' is incomplete and awkward; it should be 'the time I spend in front of the shelves' for clarity.

× Yes, I make A to do list every day before I start to do my tasks because it helped me clearly know what kind of job that I need to finish today which make my day more productive.

✓ Yes, I make a to-do list every day before I start my tasks because it helps me clearly know what kind of jobs I need to finish today, which makes my day more productive.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a'. 'To do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. 'Helped' should be present tense 'helps' to match the habitual action. 'Job' should be plural 'jobs' to match 'what kind'. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular 'which'. Also, 'start to do my tasks' is better as 'start my tasks'.

× That people don't like to make this because laws take make them fall straight when they see them on the list.

✓ Some people don't like to make lists because they feel overwhelmed when they see them on the list.

'That people' is incorrect; 'Some people' is appropriate. 'This' is vague; 'lists' is clearer. 'Laws take make them fall straight' is incorrect and unclear; 'feel overwhelmed' conveys the intended meaning. 'Them' is ambiguous; clarified as 'they' or 'people'.

× In addition, they prefer to remember them in their mind.

✓ In addition, they prefer to remember things in their mind.

'Them' is unclear; 'things' is more appropriate to refer to items on the list.

× I prefer to make a list on the paper and I can stick them just on my laptop.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper and I can stick it just on my laptop.

'On the paper' should be 'on paper' as a general expression. 'Them' refers to 'list' which is singular, so 'it' is correct.

× However, I don't like to make this on my phone because I need to open my phone where while checking my task which may be distracting.

✓ However, I don't like to make lists on my phone because I need to open my phone while checking my tasks, which may be distracting.

'This' is vague; 'lists' is clearer. 'Where while' is incorrect; 'while' alone is sufficient. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match context.