List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you could improve coherence by adding a linking phrase and a bit more detail to enrich your response. For example, explain how making a list helps you control your budget specifically.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me control my budget effectively. For instance, by listing only the items I need, I avoid unnecessary purchases and save money.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but could be more natural and concise. Try to avoid repetition and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I make a list of my work tasks, and it works well. By organizing my responsibilities this way, I can prioritize better and complete my work more efficiently.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to explain reasons logically.

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to spend spontaneously. In other words, they enjoy flexibility and find lists restrictive, so they choose not to use them.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but is a bit repetitive and slightly unclear. Try to organize your points logically and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to connect your reasons.

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because I find it more convenient and portable. Additionally, writing on paper feels safer since there's no risk of losing data like on a phone.

× Making list is kind of a personal preference because I have observed that a lot of people spend spontaneously.

✓ Making lists is kind of a personal preference because I have observed that a lot of people spend spontaneously.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general concept of making multiple lists, not just one. Using the plural form is appropriate when talking about a habitual action or general preference.

× Doing a certain list for the certain responsibilities that I need to finish allows me to be more organized and achieve things easily.

✓ Doing a specific list for the certain responsibilities that I need to finish allows me to be more organized and achieve things easily.

The phrase 'a certain list' is awkward and unclear. Replacing 'certain' with 'specific' clarifies the meaning, indicating a particular list related to responsibilities. 'Certain' is better used with plural nouns or with 'the' to specify known items.

× I prefer doing a list on a paper.

✓ I prefer making a list on paper.

The preposition 'on' is correct, but the article 'a' before 'paper' is unnecessary because 'paper' is an uncountable noun here. Also, 'making a list' is more natural than 'doing a list' in English.

× I find it more convenient and it's easier to pull anywhere.

✓ I find it more convenient and it's easier to carry anywhere.

The verb 'pull' is incorrect in this context. The correct verb is 'carry' when referring to taking something with you. 'Pull' implies dragging something behind, which is not appropriate here.

× Whenever it's just paper.

✓ Whenever it's just paper, I think there's no issue with safety as well.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a main clause. Combining it with the following sentence creates a complete thought and improves clarity.

× I think the I think there's no issue in safety as well whenever it is written on paper.

✓ I think there's no safety issue as well whenever it is written on paper.

The phrase 'the I think' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'issue in safety' should be 'safety issue' for natural English phrasing.