List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は基本的な内容を伝えていますが、文法の誤り（"a lot of thing" → "a lot of things"）や冗長な表現が見られます。また、文のつながりがやや不自然なので、接続詞を使って論理的に話す練習をしましょう。

예시: Sometimes I make a list when I have many items to buy, so I don't forget anything. However, if I go to the grocery store for a few things, I usually don't make a list.

제안: 回答に繰り返しや不自然な表現（"A list of works when I make"や"I can I can know"）があり、意味が伝わりにくいです。文法の正確さと明確な表現を意識し、接続詞を使って文をつなげる練習をしましょう。

예시: Yes, I make a list of tasks I need to complete, especially for assignments. This helps me stay organized and know exactly what I have to do.

제안: 回答は理由を述べていますが、繰り返し（"if if"）や不自然な表現があり、内容がやや曖昧です。より具体的な理由を述べ、接続詞を使って論理的に説明する練習をしましょう。

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel pressured to complete all the tasks, which can make them stressed and less focused.

제안: 回答は意図が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現（"cause paper writing I like writing"や"'cause I don't forget the phone at"）があります。接続詞を使い、文を整理して話す練習をしましょう。

예시: It depends on where I am. If I work at home, I prefer to write my list on paper because I like writing by hand. However, when I go shopping, I use my phone to make a list since I always have it with me.

× I have a lot of thing.

✓ I have a lot of things.

The noun 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items. In English, when referring to more than one item, the plural form is required.

× I make a list not to forget buying.

✓ I make a list so I don't forget to buy.

The phrase 'forget buying' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'forget to buy' when referring to remembering to perform an action in the future.

× A list of works when I make.

✓ A list of work when I make one.

The word 'works' is incorrect here; 'work' is an uncountable noun referring to tasks or assignments. Also, the sentence structure is incomplete and needs 'one' to clarify the list.

× If I make a list I can I can know what I have to do.

✓ If I make a list, I can know what I have to do.

The sentence has a repeated phrase 'I can'. Removing the repetition improves clarity and correctness.

× I think it is because if if they make a list, they are urged to do something so they may be upset and they can't concentrate doing the thing.

✓ I think it is because if they make a list, they feel urged to do something, so they may be upset and can't concentrate on doing it.

The repeated 'if' is an error. Also, 'concentrate doing the thing' should be 'concentrate on doing it' for correct preposition and pronoun use.

× But if I go to shopping I make a list with the phone 'cause I don't forget the phone at.

✓ But if I go shopping, I make a list on my phone because I don't forget my phone.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'. Also, 'make a list with the phone' is better as 'make a list on my phone'. The phrase 'I don't forget the phone at' is incomplete and corrected to 'I don't forget my phone'.