List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
Yes, I often make a list when I am going to shop because it is really important for me to know what I need to buy and don't forget something important.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
Yes, I usually make a list for my work. It's really convenient for me and I do my job more quickly, so I think it work very good.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because it takes some time, but in my opinion it's so stupid because you will spend more time in the shop and I spend more time at home and less time in the shopping mall.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
I prefer to make a list on my phone because in the phone you can buy the application like notes and it's really convenient to make notes there.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 75.0제안: Ответ звучит немного повторяющимся и не очень естественным. Следует избегать тавтологии и использовать более разнообразные выражения, чтобы сделать ответ более плавным и естественным.
예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and prevents me from forgetting important items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 70.0제안: В ответе есть грамматические ошибки и нечеткое выражение мысли. Следует использовать правильные формы глаголов и более точные выражения для описания пользы списков.
예시: Yes, I often make lists for my work because they help me stay organized and complete tasks more efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 60.0제안: Ответ слишком длинный и содержит повторения, а также нечетко выражает мысль. Следует структурировать ответ, избегать повторов и использовать более вежливую лексику.
예시: Some people dislike making lists because it takes time, but I believe it actually saves time by helping you shop more quickly and efficiently.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 65.0제안: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Следует использовать правильные предлоги и более точные формулировки, а также избегать излишних слов.
예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because apps like Notes are convenient and easy to use for organizing my shopping items.
문법
× I think it work very good.
✓ I think it works very well.
The subject 'it' requires the verb in third person singular form 'works'. Also, 'good' is an adjective, but here an adverb 'well' is needed to modify the verb 'works'. This is a subject-verb agreement and adverb usage issue.
× I think it work very good.
✓ I think it works very well.
The word 'good' is an adjective, but in this sentence, an adverb 'well' is required to describe how 'it works'. Using 'good' here is incorrect; 'well' should be used instead.
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