List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
Yes, I do. I always write down what I want to buy when I go to shop. I think it's a really good habit for me to buy something because it can Remember Me and after that I do not lose to buy something so.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
Yes I do. I have a little notebooks which is very beautiful and I always writing my To Do List on it. Sometimes if I don't bring these books I then use my phones to do the list. I think it's work because this reminded me what I need to do.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
I think the first reason is that it will make them under pressure. You know that then people cannot change their like their To Do List or when they work to do next. So it's lose flexibility and may make them feel uncomfortable.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
Actually, compared with writing list on the phone, I prefer to write them on the paper. The first reason is that the writing process will remind me and tell me what the list or things I need to do during the day. The second reason is that the paper you can just put aside your.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 60.0제안: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构较为混乱，影响了表达的自然和有效性。建议注意时态和句子连贯性，避免重复和语法错误。
예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store. It helps me remember what I need to buy, so I don't forget anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如时态和单复数形式，且表达不够流畅。建议加强语法准确性，使用连接词使句子更连贯。
예시: Yes, I keep a small, beautiful notebook where I write my to-do lists. If I forget it, I use my phone instead. This method works well because it reminds me of my tasks.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误，逻辑连接不够顺畅。建议理清思路，使用恰当的连接词和准确的表达方式。
예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel pressured to follow them strictly. This reduces their flexibility and can make them uncomfortable.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答未完整，句子结构不完整且表达不够清晰。建议完整表达观点，使用连贯的句子和适当的连接词。
예시: I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone. Writing by hand helps me remember my tasks better, and I can easily set the paper aside when I'm busy.
문법
× I always writing my To Do List on it.
✓ I am always writing my To Do List on it.
这里缺少助动词，动词writing需要与主语和时态匹配，正确形式是am writing，表示现在进行时。
× I have a little notebooks which is very beautiful
✓ I have a little notebook which is very beautiful
notebooks是复数形式，但前面用了a little，a little只能修饰不可数名词，且后面用is单数动词，说明应为单数notebook。
× I think it's work because this reminded me what I need to do.
✓ I think it works because this reminds me what I need to do.
这里动词时态和主谓一致错误，it作为第三人称单数，动词应加s，且时态应保持一致。
× I always write down what I want to buy when I go to shop.
✓ I always write down what I want to buy when I go shopping.
go后面应接动名词形式表示去做某事，go to shop不符合习惯用法，应改为go shopping。
× The paper you can just put aside your.
✓ The paper you can just put aside.
句末的your缺少宾语，且不需要，造成句子不完整，应去掉your。
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