List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words (uh). Improve grammar: use correct verb forms and articles.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list. It helps me remember essential items and prevents impulse buys, so I save time and money. For example, before grocery shopping I list ingredients I need for the week, which makes my trips much quicker.

제안: Be direct and avoid repetition. Use one clear topic sentence and then one or two specific effects of lists on your work, connected with linking words (for example, because, so). Fix grammar (e.g., “it works well,” “I can manage my time”).

예시: Yes, I keep a to-do list for work and it works well. Because I write down tasks and deadlines, I can prioritise important jobs and manage my time more efficiently, so I rarely miss anything important.

제안: Give a concise opinion with clear reasons and a linking word. Avoid vague phrases and filler sounds. Use correct grammar and more specific vocabulary (e.g., ‘habit’, ‘prefer spontaneity’).

예시: I think it depends on personal habits and preferences. Some people prefer spontaneity or find lists restrictive, while others simply never developed the habit of planning, so they don’t bother making lists.

제안: Answer directly with one clear reason and a brief supporting detail. Remove repetition and unclear words (e.g., 'confident' is incorrect here). Use correct comparative forms and fewer filler phrases.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. For instance, using the Notes app lets me check and update my shopping list instantly while I’m in the store.

× Yes, I do list when I shop because it provides information about what I need and sometimes I forgot to buy things, Uh, and that also keep me in mind that I need to buy this for my home and it also very helpful for the people to organize their things or organize the shop.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because it provides information about what I need and sometimes I forget to buy things. It also keeps in my mind that I need to buy things for my home and it is very helpful for people to organize their belongings or plan their shopping.

The verb 'do list' is incorrect; English uses 'make a list' (verb + noun). 'Forgot' should be present 'forget' to match 'sometimes' habitual action (present simple). 'Keep me in mind' is incorrect; use 'keeps in my mind' or better 'helps me remember'. Subject-verb agreement needed: 'that also keep me' -> 'it also keeps'. Also 'it also very helpful' lacks the verb 'is'. Suggestions: use present simple for habits, maintain subject-verb agreement, and use common collocations: 'make a list', 'forget', 'help(s) me remember', 'organize their belongings'.

× Yes, I do make a list for my work and yes it does work. Really not only work, it does really do a good work because for that I can manage my time efficiently throughout the day and also do the proper work organizing by organizing the things I need to do for that.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work and it does work. It not only helps me work, it really does a good job because it helps me manage my time efficiently throughout the day and organize the tasks I need to do.

Overuse of 'do' is unnecessary and awkward. Use present simple 'I make' for habitual actions. 'Really not only work' is incorrect order; use 'It not only helps'. 'Do a good work' is unidiomatic; use 'does a good job' or 'is very helpful'. Also 'do the proper work organizing by organizing the things' is repetitive; simplify to 'organize the tasks'. Suggestions: avoid redundant auxiliaries, use correct collocations ('does a good job'), and keep verbs in present simple for habits.

× Uh, I think it depends on people's, uh, habits. Because if a person not habituate about the making list or organizing their day work, they are not like to do thing like to make lists and it on it depends on their, on their perspective.

✓ I think it depends on people's habits. If a person is not used to making lists or organizing their day, they do not like to make lists; it depends on their perspective.

'People's, uh, habits' is fine but redundant pauses removed. 'Person not habituate about the making list' is ungrammatical—use 'is not used to' or 'is not habituated to' plus gerund 'making lists'. 'They are not like to do thing' should be 'they do not like to make lists'. Suggestions: use 'be used to' + verb-ing for habits, use 'do not like' for negative preferences, and keep pronoun agreement ('their' for singular generic 'person' is acceptable).

× I prefer make a list on my phone or in notes because it's very very confident for me because always I always carry my phone when I go outside.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone or in Notes because it's very convenient for me since I always carry my phone when I go out.

Use 'prefer to make' (prefer + infinitive) or 'prefer making'. 'On my phone or in notes' — capitalize 'Notes' if referring to the app; use 'in Notes' or 'in the Notes app'. 'Confident' is wrong word choice; 'convenient' is appropriate. 'Always I always' is redundant; use 'I always'. 'Go outside' -> 'go out' is more natural. Suggestions: use correct verb patterns ('prefer to'), choose correct prepositions ('on my phone', 'in Notes'), and select correct adjectives ('convenient').

× So making list on my phone is that always it always has in my hand whenever I need it.

✓ Making a list on my phone is easy because I always have it in my hand whenever I need it.

Original sentence has incorrect word order and unnecessary words 'is that always it always has'. Use subject 'I' with present simple 'have' for possession. Also 'making list' should be 'making a list'. Suggested correction simplifies and fixes subject-verb agreement and word order.

× So it is more easier for me to make list on my phone.

✓ So it is easier for me to make a list on my phone.

'More easier' is a double comparative; use either 'more easy' or 'easier'—correct is 'easier'. Also add the article 'a' before 'list'. Suggestions: avoid double comparatives and include required articles.