List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 用中文：回答要更自然、简洁并遵循基本结构——先给出直接回答，再用1-2句具体细节支撑。避免语法和词汇错误（例如不用大写的“A”在“to-do list”中、修正“coming of winter”等）。可用连词（for example, therefore, while）使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I usually make a to-do list when I go shopping. For example, if winter is coming I prioritize warm clothes like coats and sweaters, and I leave less important items like T-shirts for later.

제안: 用中文：回答要更直接并减少填充词（如"umm"）。结构上先说明是否做清单，再说明效果并给出具体例子。使用更准确的词汇（"helpful"代替模糊表达），并用连接词（so, then）使逻辑更清晰。

예시: Yes, I always make a work to-do list and it helps me stay organized. For example, because I have an exam next week I will review study materials first, then I will work on social media tasks afterwards.

제안: 用中文：回答要更条理清楚，避免重复和语法错误。先给出一两个清晰原因，再用具体说明或例子支持。去掉犹豫词（如"uh"），并用连接词（because, therefore, for instance）组织句子。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find them restrictive and feel distracted by constantly checking tasks. For instance, someone who prefers spontaneity may think a list interrupts their flow, so they avoid using one.

제안: 用中文：回答不完整，必须给出完整直接的回答并解释原因。保持一句主题句加一两句支持细节，举例说明。可比较纸质和手机清单的优缺点来丰富内容。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I can edit them easily. However, sometimes I use paper when I want to remember things better or when my phone battery is low.

× Yes, I will make A to do list when I have a lot of things to be purchased.

✓ Yes, I will make a to-do list when I have a lot of things to be purchased.

句中“A to do list”中的冠词和连字符使用不当。英语中通常说“a to-do list”，且“to-do”作为复合形容词或名词时用连字符。因此应改为“小写a”和“to-do”连字符形式。建议：使用“a to-do list”。

× For example, I will prioritize the clothes that I need most in the coming of winter and the T-shirts, which is less important.

✓ For example, I will prioritize the clothes that I need most for the coming winter, and T-shirts, which are less important.

句中存在形容词/名词搭配以及主谓一致问题。“in the coming of winter”不地道，应为“for the coming winter”。另外“the T-shirts, which is less important”中“T-shirts”为复数，关系从句谓语动词应为复数“are”。建议：用“for the coming winter”并确保单复数一致。

× I will leave them the list.

✓ I will leave the list for them.

原句中“leave them the list”的词序不自然；更常见和清晰的表达是“leave the list for them”。同时“them”指代不明时放在后面更清晰。建议按“leave + object + for + person”结构表达。

× Yes, during the work I will always make A to do list and I will prioritize the important things I need to do first.

✓ Yes, during work I will always make a to-do list and prioritize the most important things I need to do first.

同样存在冠词和连字符错误，应为“a to-do list”。此外“during the work”不自然，通常说“during work”或“at work”。可简化为“during work”。建议使用“a to-do list”并改为“during work”。

× For example, I need to review for the exam next week, so I will do this first and then the umm social media work which is my interest.

✓ For example, I need to review for the exam next week, so I will do that first and then do the social media work, which is my interest.

原句中代词和动词搭配不当，“do this first”可改为“do that first”更自然；此外“the umm social media work which is my interest”中缺少逗号并且表达不自然，改为“do the social media work, which is my interest”。建议在口语中减少填充词并注意代词指代清晰。

× While there may be a couple of reasons that why people don't want to make a list because some people will feel like it will be distracted from all this stuff happening now and then.

✓ There may be a couple of reasons why people don't want to make a list. For example, some people feel that it distracts them from what is happening now and then.

原句结构混乱，包含重复因果连词“that why”和“because”，应二分为两句以提高清晰度。另外“it will be distracted from all this stuff happening now and then”在语态和主语上不正确，应为“it distracts them”或“it distracts people”。建议把句子拆分并用主动语态表达。

× So the plan will not be, uh, running into a.

✓ So the plan will not run as intended.

原句残缺且结构不完整，“running into a”没有完成意思。可改为更完整的表达“the plan will not run as intended”或“the plan will not work out”。建议尽量说完整句子并避免口语填充词。

× My 2.

✓ My second preference is my phone. (或：I prefer using my phone.)

原句不完整，只有“My 2.”无法表达意思。需补全为完整句子，例如“My second preference is my phone”或“I prefer using my phone”。建议说出完整答案并避免简写或数字代替词语。