List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatical and precise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid slang and ungrammatical phrases (e.g., 'wasting my money onto dumb thing'). Use correct verb forms and articles.

예시: Yes — I always make a shopping list. For example, it helps me avoid impulse buys and stick to a budget, so I don't waste money on unnecessary items.

제안: Organize the answer: give a clear topic sentence then a concise explanation using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., 'I make a checklist at work' not 'checklist when I'm done one things') and avoid filler words. Provide a specific example of how the list helps you.

예시: Yes, I make a checklist at work and it works well. For instance, it helps me track completed tasks and ensures I don't forget deadlines, so I feel more organized and less stressed.

제안: Answer directly with a clear reason and one supporting detail. Avoid hesitations and fragmented sentences. Use linking words (e.g., 'because', 'however') and precise vocabulary ('prefer spontaneity' instead of 'feel free').

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer spontaneity and feel lists are too restrictive. However, others, like me, find lists helpful for planning and reducing stress.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and two specific supporting reasons with correct grammar. Remove hesitations and fix agreement errors ('it is really convenient' and 'deadlines are coming up'). Mention an app or feature to be more specific.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's very convenient and I can carry it everywhere. Also, calendar reminders and to-do apps alert me about upcoming deadlines, so I don't miss anything.

× Yes, definitely if I don't wanna spend a lot of money or wasting my money onto dumb thing.

✓ Yes, definitely. If I don't want to spend a lot of money or waste my money on dumb things.

Errors: informal contraction 'wanna' should be 'want to' (standard written English); parallel structure required between verbs after 'or' so use base form 'waste' not gerund 'wasting'; preposition 'onto' is incorrect here — use 'on'; noun should be plural 'things'. Suggestion: use 'want to' and maintain parallel verb forms ('spend' and 'waste'), use 'on' for spending money 'on things', and pluralize when speaking generally. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes, also in the work I also checklist when I'm done one things because I feel comfortable when I can make sure that I can do many tasks, uh, in the list that I've listed before.

✓ Yes. At work I also use a checklist when I finish tasks because I feel comfortable knowing I have completed the items on the list I wrote earlier.

Errors: 'in the work' is awkward — use 'at work'; 'also' repeated twice (redundant); 'checklist' needs a verb 'use a checklist'; 'I'm done one things' mixes forms — should be 'I finish tasks' or 'I am done with tasks' and plural 'things' isn't specific; 'when I can make sure that I can do many tasks' is awkward and incorrect tense/structure — replace with 'knowing I have completed the items'; 'the list that I've listed before' is redundant — use 'the list I wrote earlier'. Suggestion: simplify sentences, correct prepositions, use plural/singular correctly, and avoid redundancy. Grammar problem type ID:22

× I know some people don't like to make a list because they feel like uh. And free. They feel like they are forced to do it when they make a list before. But I am the converse.

✓ I know some people don't like to make a list because they feel it limits their freedom. They feel forced to follow it if they make a list. I feel the opposite.

Errors: sentence fragments 'they feel like uh. And free.' are incorrect structure — combine into one clause; 'make a list before' is awkward — use 'if they make a list' or 'when they make a list'; 'I am the converse' is non-idiomatic — use 'I feel the opposite'. Suggestion: avoid fragments, use clear clauses, and choose idiomatic expressions ('the opposite'). Grammar problem type ID:26

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it really convenient to take with and it also reminds me when the, uh, you know, like the deadlines is coming up.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's really convenient to carry, and it also reminds me when deadlines are coming up.

Errors: missing verb 'is' or contraction 'it's' before 'really convenient'; 'to take with' is non-idiomatic — use 'to carry' or 'to take with me'; 'the deadlines is coming up' has subject-verb agreement error — 'deadlines are coming up' (plural subject requires plural verb) and unnecessary 'the'. Also remove filler phrases 'uh, you know, like'. Suggestion: include the correct verb or contraction, use correct prepositions/phrases for portability, and ensure subject-verb agreement for plural nouns. Grammar problem type ID:27