List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Reduce hesitations and repetition, use a clear topic sentence, and add one specific detail with a linking phrase. Aim for natural phrasing and a maximum of 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me find items quickly. For example, I group things by aisle, so I can finish shopping faster and avoid buying unnecessary items.

제안: Use a concise topic sentence, avoid repeating the same phrase, and include a specific example of how the list helps. Use linking words (for example, so) to clarify the result.

예시: Yes, I always make a to-do list for work because it keeps me organized. For example, when I write deadlines next to each task, I can prioritize urgent items and complete my work on time.

제안: Answer directly to the question with a clear opinion sentence, avoid double negatives and repetition, and give one specific reason with a linking word (because or perhaps).

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find them time-consuming. For example, busy people may feel they cannot spare time to write lists and prefer to rely on memory.

제안: Start with a clear preference sentence, reduce fillers and repeated words, and include a brief specific advantage with a linking word (because or so).

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me. As a result, I can check or update my list quickly while shopping and I rarely lose it.

× Yes, when I do shopping I make a list of all products that umm.

✓ Yes, when I go shopping I make a list of all the products.

Use 'go shopping' (verb + -ing set expression) rather than 'do shopping'; add definite article 'the' before 'products' to refer to specific items. Suggest practicing common collocations like 'go shopping' and using articles with countable plural nouns when referring to a specific group.

× It helps me a lot to find the product that I need and even it saves my time when I do shopping.

✓ It helps me a lot to find the products I need and even saves me time when I go shopping.

Avoid repeating subject pronoun 'it' after 'and'; use plural 'products' to match 'find the products I need'. Use 'saves me time' (correct object pronoun order) and 'go shopping' collocation. Suggest removing redundant pronouns and matching plural nouns to general needs.

× Yes, I always make a list of my work and it really helps me a lot and whenever I forget about my work I just check the list of my work and I remember all the work and it by the least I can complete my work on time.

✓ Yes, I always make a list of my tasks and it really helps me a lot; whenever I forget something I check the list and remember everything so I can complete my work on time.

Use 'tasks' instead of repeated 'work' for clarity; avoid awkward phrases like 'forget about my work' and 'it by the least'. Combine clauses with punctuation and use concise expressions ('remember everything', 'so I can complete my work on time'). Suggest simplifying repetitive nouns and using common collocations like 'check the list'.

× I don't think so that people don't like to making list because least helps a lot to save you time and also helps in your work and study.

✓ I don't think people dislike making lists because lists help a lot to save time and also help with work and study.

Do not use double negatives ('I don't think so that people don't like'); change 'to making' to gerund 'making' without 'to'; use plural 'lists' and include article or plural form; use 'help with' for activities. Suggest avoiding double negatives, using correct gerund structures, and matching subject-verb number.

× I think the people who don't make least I think they haven't any time and they can't manage their time.

✓ I think the people who don't make lists don't have any time and can't manage their time.

Use plural 'lists' and proper negative structure 'don't have' instead of 'haven't any' in this context; remove redundant 'I think'. Suggest practicing standard negative forms and pluralization for countable nouns.

× Uh, I prefer to make a list on phone because if you make a list on paper paper, you can forget about the paper that, umm, you have to search for it.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because if you make a list on paper, you might forget it and then have to search for it.

Add possessive 'my' for 'phone'; remove duplicated 'paper paper'; use 'might forget it' for possibility and avoid 'forget about the paper that you have to search for it' redundancy. Suggest using possessive forms and modal verbs for possibility.

× But if you make notes in your phone, you can easily check the list on your phone and it helps you time a lot.

✓ But if you make notes on your phone, you can easily check the list and it saves you a lot of time.

Use preposition 'on' with 'phone'; avoid repeating 'on your phone'; use 'saves you a lot of time' rather than 'helps you time a lot'. Suggest using correct prepositions with devices and common verbs like 'save time'.