List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct small errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail. Use correct phrasing (e.g., “tick items off” not “tick things up”) and a linking word for clarity.

예시: It depends on how many items I need. For a few things I don’t make a list, but when I have many items I create a checklist so I can tick items off and avoid forgetting anything.

제안: Good structure and detail. Improve by slightly tightening language and adding a linking word to connect reason and result. Avoid redundancy (e.g., “I find it very useful and helps me” → combine).

예시: Yes. On arrival at work I make a prioritized to-do list so I can tackle the most important tasks first; this keeps me productive and focused throughout the day.

제안: Correct word choice and tighten sentences. Use a clear topic sentence, then explain with a specific reason and a brief contrasting point using linking words (e.g., “because,” “however”). Avoid vague phrasing like “fight making lists.”

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they trust their memory and see lists as a waste of time. However, even though writing a list takes time at first, it soon becomes a habit and greatly improves organization and productivity.

제안: Fix grammatical errors and be concise. Start with a clear preference sentence, then give two specific reasons linked logically. Correct “is more convenient” to “it is more convenient.”

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it lets me add checkboxes and keep items neatly organized. It is also more convenient and faster than paper, and I can easily share the list with others when needed.

× If I only buy a few things I don't usually make a shopping list, but when I have to buy many items I make a list with check boxes so I can tick things up to not forget anything.

✓ If I only buy a few things, I don't usually make a shopping list, but when I have to buy many items I make a list with check boxes so I can tick things off to avoid forgetting anything.

Original uses 'tick things up' which is not idiomatic; the correct phrasal verb is 'tick off' (verb + adverb particle). Also 'to not forget' is less natural than 'to avoid forgetting' or 'so I don't forget'; using 'forgetting' requires the -ing form after 'avoid'. Add comma after introductory clause for clarity.

× For example, when I first arrive at the company, I often create a list of things I should complete that day and order them by priority so that I can finish the most important task first.

✓ For example, when I first arrive at the company, I often create a list of things I should complete that day and order it by priority so that I can finish the most important task first.

The sentence refers to a single 'list', so the pronoun and verb should agree with singular 'list'. Using 'order them' implies multiple lists or items; better is 'order it' (referring to the list) or 'order the items' if referring to list items. Maintain singular agreement to avoid confusion.

× I find it very useful and helps me stay productive and focused.

✓ I find it very useful and it helps me stay productive and focused.

Parallel structure requires two coordinated clauses: 'I find it very useful' and 'it helps me...'. The original omits the subject 'it' before 'helps', creating a fragment or awkward coordination. Adding 'it' fixes sentence structure and clarity.

× I think some people fight making lists unnecessary and a waste of time because they trust their memory ability.

✓ I think some people find making lists unnecessary and a waste of time because they trust their memory.

The verb 'fight' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'find' (meaning consider). Also 'memory ability' is unnatural; native usage is 'memory'. This corrects word choice and noun collocation.

× However, although writing this can take time initially, it becomes a habit over time and can make your work and life much more organized and productive.

✓ However, although writing lists can take time initially, it becomes a habit and can make your work and life much more organized and productive.

The pronoun 'this' is vague; 'writing lists' is clearer and matches context. 'Over time' is redundant with 'initially' and 'becomes a habit'; removing one improves concision. The sentence structure is clarified by specifying the subject.

× I prefer making a list on my phone because I can easily add checkboxes and tables to keep everything neat and well organized.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because I can easily add checkboxes and tables to keep everything neat and well-organized.

Hyphenation 'well-organized' as a compound adjective before or after a noun improves correctness. The original is acceptable but hyphenation is more standard. No major grammatical change besides punctuation.

× Moreover, is more convenient and saves time than writing on paper, and I can quickly share this with other people when needed.

✓ Moreover, it is more convenient and saves time than writing on paper, and I can quickly share it with other people when needed.

The clause is missing the subject 'it' before 'is', causing a sentence fragment. Also replace 'this' with 'it' to refer back to 'making a list on my phone' consistently. Maintain subject-verb agreement and clear pronoun reference.