List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Улучшите краткость и ясность ответа, избегайте повторов и неуверённых заполнителей (uh). Начните с прямого утверждения, затем добавьте одно или два конкретных пояснения с связкой. Также исправьте грамматические ошибки (например: "in my mind" -> "in my head", "on the store" -> "in the store").

예시: I usually don't make a shopping list because I remember the items I need and often buy the same groceries. However, I do write a list when I plan to buy clothes to avoid forgetting sizes or styles.

제안: Сформулируйте причину более уверенно и добавьте одно конкретное пояснение. Избегайте лишних слов и исправьте структуру предложения (например: "it's no necessity" -> "it's unnecessary").

예시: No, I don't make a work list because my shifts are short, typically around five hours, so I can manage tasks without a formal to-do list.

제안: Дайте более развернутый и грамматически правильный ответ, используйте связки и конкретный пример. Исправьте ошибки ("make" -> "makes", "feel yourself like an liar" -> "feel like a liar").

예시: Some people dislike lists because they feel pressured to complete every item; for example, if they miss a task, they may feel guilty or like a failure.

제안: Сформулируйте чёткое выборочное заявление, дайте два конкретных контраста с плавными связками и поправьте формулировки ("related to study" -> "it's related to studying", "Wellness and the care to" unclear -> "personal health and care").

예시: It depends: for study-related tasks I prefer paper lists because I remember things better when I write them, but for personal health or daily reminders I use my phone since it’s always with me and more convenient.

× Actually, I don't because, uh, it's easy to keep in my mind this list and I buy, uh, the same things on the store and shopping and, uh, I make list when I need to buy some clothes.

✓ Actually, I don't because it's easy to keep this list in my mind and I buy the same things at the store; I make a list only when I need to buy clothes.

The sentence contains present tense and word order problems. Use correct word order 'keep this list in my mind' and the simple present 'I buy' is fine. Use the correct preposition 'at the store' not 'on the store'. Use the article 'a list' when referring to making a list occasionally. Combine clauses with punctuation for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× No, I don't. Uh, because my work takes about 5 hours and uh, it's no necessity To Do List.

✓ No, I don't. Because my work takes about five hours, a To-Do list is not necessary.

Incorrect article and noun phrase order. Use 'a To-Do list' with the indefinite article and the adjective 'not necessary' rather than 'it's no necessity To Do List'. Also spell out numbers in formal speech or write 'five'. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× Because making a list make you have to do these things on the list and, uh, when you don't do it, you feel yourself like an liar.

✓ Because making a list makes you have to do the things on it, and when you don't, you feel like a liar.

Subject-verb agreement: 'making a list' is singular, so use 'makes'. Use pronoun/reference consistency: 'do it' is awkward; better 'when you don't' referring to completing items. Article error: use 'a liar' not 'an liar'. Also 'feel yourself like' is incorrect — use 'feel like'. Grammar problem type ID: 27

× If it related to study, I like to do it on the paper, but it's about my Wellness and the care to.

✓ If it's related to study, I like to do it on paper, but for wellness and personal care I prefer a To-Do list on my phone.

Preposition and phrase errors: use 'related to' with 'it's related to study' and 'on paper' (not 'on the paper'). 'About my Wellness and the care to' is ungrammatical — use 'for wellness and personal care'. Also add possessive 'my phone' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× I like To Do List on the phone because I go with phone everywhere and it's convenient.

✓ I like a To-Do list on my phone because I take my phone everywhere and it's convenient.

Use correct noun phrase: 'a To-Do list' and possessive 'my phone'. Replace 'go with phone everywhere' with 'take my phone everywhere' (present simple habitual action). This keeps present tense consistent and uses correct verb forms. Grammar problem type ID: 10}]} PMID:undefined