List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: ต้องตอบให้ตรงคำถามและเป็นธรรมชาติ ลดความซ้ำซ้อน ใช้ประโยคหัวข้อแล้วตามด้วยเหตุผลหรือยกตัวอย่างสั้น ๆ ควรใช้คำและไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น ใช้คำว่า "This practice" แทน "this act of action" และหลีกเลี่ยงวลีซ้ำซ้อน เช่น "what's what is the point" รวมทั้งจำกัดยาวไม่เกิน 3–4 ประโยค

예시: No, I usually don’t make a shopping list. I prefer to buy things spontaneously because I remember what I need. However, when I have many items to buy I sometimes make a quick note on my phone to avoid forgetting anything.

제안: ตอบให้ชัดเจนว่าไม่ทำหรือทำ แล้วอธิบายเหตุผลเป็นข้อ ๆ ใช้ภาษาเรียบง่ายและหลีกเลี่ยงการหยุดชะงักหรือคำเติมเสียง (fillers) เช่น "like" หรือการพูดซ้ำ ควรเชื่อมเหตุผลด้วยคำเชื่อม เช่น "because" หรือ "so"

예시: No, I don’t usually make work lists. I prefer to go with the flow because I find strict routines stressful. As a result, I manage tasks spontaneously and only make lists when a project has many deadlines.

제안: คำตอบคลุมเครือ: เริ่มด้วยประโยคหัวข้อที่ตอบคำถามโดยตรง แล้วตามด้วยสาเหตุที่ชัดเจนและตัวอย่างเชิงเหตุผล ใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น "they often forget things" และหลีกเลี่ยงประโยคสวนทาง เช่น บอกว่าไม่ชอบแต่ให้เหตุผลที่ทำให้ควรชอบรายการ ควรให้ 2-3 เหตุผลสั้น ๆ เชื่อมด้วยคำเชื่อม

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it’s time-consuming and restrictive. For example, busy people may prefer flexibility, and others simply forget to update lists, so lists become useless to them.

제안: ตอบให้ชัดว่าชอบอะไรและให้เหตุผลสั้น ๆ ใช้คำศัพท์ถูกต้อง (เช่น "portable" ไม่ใช่ "port portable") และตัดคำเติมเสียงออก ควรเชื่อมเหตุผลด้วยคำว่า "because" หรือ "so" และยกตัวอย่างสั้น ๆ เพื่อสนับสนุน

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it’s portable and easy to access. For example, when I’m busy I can quickly open a notes app and jot down items instead of carrying a notebook.

× I used to have a friend who always lists things that they want to buy.

✓ I used to have a friend who always listed the things he or she wanted to buy.

The original sentence mixes past habitual 'used to' with present-tense 'lists' and uses the plural pronoun 'they' to refer to a singular 'friend'. Use past tense 'listed' to match 'used to' and use a singular pronoun ('he or she') or rephrase to pluralize the subject. Suggestion: keep subject and verb tense consistent and match pronoun number to its antecedent.

× However, I think that this act of action is really useless and what's what is the point of doing that?

✓ However, I think that this action is really useless; what is the point of doing that?

The phrase 'act of action' is redundant; use 'action' only. 'What's what is the point' is a garbled question; use 'what is the point'. The semicolon or a period separates the clauses more clearly. Suggestion: remove redundancy and simplify the question structure.

× Like eventually you have to memorize in your brain and get the things.

✓ Eventually you have to remember the items and get them.

The phrase 'memorize in your brain' is awkward and redundant; 'remember' is sufficient. 'Get the things' should be 'get them' or 'buy them'. Rearranged for natural English word order. Suggestion: use concise verbs and correct object pronouns.

× Honestly speaking, I don't do the kinds of patterns in my life.

✓ Honestly speaking, I don't follow that kind of routine in my life.

'Do the kinds of patterns' is unidiomatic. Use 'follow that kind of routine' or 'use those kinds of patterns'. Match number: 'kind' with singular 'routine' or plural 'kinds' with 'patterns'. Suggestion: choose idiomatic collocations like 'follow a routine'.

× I always go with the flow if it's if it's two patterns, I don't think that I'm able to like follow since it is so hard for me.

✓ I always go with the flow; if there are two different routines, I don't think I can follow them because it's too hard for me.

The original repeats 'if it's' and uses 'two patterns' ambiguously. Use 'there are' for existence of plural 'routines' and plural pronoun 'them' to refer to 'routines'. Replace 'able to like follow' with 'can follow' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: avoid fillers like 'like' and reduce repetition.

× The first reason would be because there they are always forget things and they want to make sure that they will not make the same mistake.

✓ The first reason is that they always forget things and want to make sure they do not make the same mistake again.

'There they are always forget' is ungrammatical. Use 'they always forget'. 'Would be because' is awkward; use 'is that'. 'Will not make' in this context is better as 'do not make' or 'do not make... again'. Suggestion: simplify clause structure and use correct verb forms after subject.

× Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

✓ Do you prefer to make a list on paper or on your phone?

Parallel prepositional structure is required: use 'on paper' and 'on your phone'. The missing preposition before 'your phone' makes the sentence uneven. Suggestion: maintain parallel structure when offering alternatives.

× For some extent, if it is really urgency and I'm dealing with something else so I don't have time to memorize thing, I would definitely go for your phone since it is port portable and it is easy to access.

✓ To some extent, if it is really urgent and I'm dealing with something else so I don't have time to remember things, I would definitely use my phone since it is portable and easy to access.

Use 'to some extent' not 'for some extent'. 'Urgency' (noun) should be 'urgent' (adjective). 'Memorize thing' should be 'remember things'. 'Go for your phone' incorrectly uses 'your'; should be 'use my phone' in first person. 'Port portable' seems mistyped; 'portable' is correct. Suggestion: check word forms (noun vs adjective), possessive consistency, pluralization, and typos.

× Like if I umm just grab it from my pocket and just take notes from the phone.

✓ For example, I can just grab it from my pocket and take notes on my phone.

Beginning with 'Like if I umm' is filler and ungrammatical. Use 'For example' or 'For instance'. 'Take notes from the phone' is unnatural; use 'take notes on my phone'. Ensure possession 'my phone' matches speaker. Suggestion: remove fillers and use correct preposition 'on' with 'take notes'.