List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và trật tự câu; trả lời nên trực tiếp, ngắn gọn và rõ ràng (tối đa ~3 câu). Dùng từ vựng đúng (ví dụ: "shop on my phone" hoặc "shop impulsively") và sửa các lỗi động từ/đại từ. Thêm một câu giải thích cụ thể và liên kết rõ ràng (because/so) để câu mạch lạc hơn.

예시: No, I usually shop on my phone impulsively because it feels more relaxing than making a long list. I used to write lists, but I still bought things I didn't need, so I stopped.

제안: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (thì, danh từ, mạo từ) và dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng. Tránh lặp từ (use once). Thêm liên từ (for example, therefore) và cụ thể hóa cách list giúp (ví dụ: prioritize, set deadlines) để tăng tính thuyết phục.

예시: Sometimes I make a list for important work because it helps me focus and prevents me from forgetting tasks. For example, I prioritize tasks and set deadlines, so I can work more efficiently.

제안: Cần cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và dùng từ vựng phù hợp (e.g., "time-consuming", "ineffective"). Sử dụng linking words (for example, because) và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (subject-verb agreement, articles). Nên đưa ví dụ cụ thể hoặc lý do rõ ràng hơn.

예시: Some people find making lists time-consuming and ineffective because they rarely finish everything on the list. For example, if tasks are vague, people may lose motivation and avoid using lists.

제안: Cải thiện trật tự từ và ngữ pháp (chia câu đúng, dùng tính từ đúng). Trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích ngắn gọn với ví dụ cụ thể (e.g., reminders, syncing). Tránh từ lặp và dùng collocations chính xác (e.g., "take my phone everywhere", "easy to check").

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it’s more convenient — I take my phone everywhere and can easily check and edit items. Also, apps let me set reminders and sync lists across devices.

× No, I often shopping mobile on my emotion.

✓ No, I often shop for things on my phone based on my mood.

The verb 'shopping' is incorrectly used after 'often' without an auxiliary; use the base form 'shop' (frequency adverb + base verb). 'Shopping mobile on my emotion' is ungrammatical: use 'shop for things on my phone based on my mood'. Suggestion: use adverb + base verb and clearer nouns/phrases.'

× No, I often shopping mobile on my emotion.

✓ No, I often shop for things on my phone based on my mood.

The preposition 'on' with 'emotion' is incorrect; use 'based on my mood'. Also 'mobile' should be 'my phone' and 'shop for' is the correct collocation.'

× I think it's more comfortable and relaxing than make a long list.

✓ I think it's more comfortable and relaxing than making a long list.

After 'than' when comparing gerunds are appropriate here; use 'making' instead of base verb 'make'. Suggestion: use parallel gerund form in comparisons.'

× I used to make a list but I still bite over so I think I doesn't need to do it.

✓ I used to make a list but I still buy too much so I think I don't need to do it.

'bite over' is incorrect; likely intended 'buy too much'. 'Doesn't' is wrong for 'I' subject; use 'don't'. Also maintain past/factual contrast with 'used to' and present 'don't need'. Suggestion: check verb spelling and subject-verb agreement.'

× I used to make a list but I still bite over so I think I doesn't need to do it.

✓ I used to make a list but I still buy too much so I think I don't need to do it.

'doesn't' is third person singular negative; for 'I' use 'don't'. Ensure subject-verb agreement in negatives.'

× Sometimes I often said a good for important work.

✓ Sometimes I often make a list for important work.

'said a good' is incorrect and 'said' (past form) is wrong in context. Use 'make a list' (present) to match habitual action. Remove 'often' redundancy: 'Sometimes' or 'often' not both.'

× Sometimes I often said a good for important work.

✓ Sometimes I make a list for important work.

The sentence lacks correct object and verb form. 'Said a good' is ungrammatical. Simplify to clear structure: subject + verb + object. Avoid using both 'sometimes' and 'often' together.'

× It help me focus and don't forget important tasks.

✓ It helps me focus and not forget important tasks.

'It' requires third person singular verb 'helps'. Also use 'not forget' in parallel with 'focus'. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with subject and maintain parallel structure.'

× Moreover, I can work effectively in a productivity.

✓ Moreover, I can work more productively.

'In a productivity' is ungrammatical. Use adverb 'productively' to modify 'work' or phrase 'with greater productivity'. Suggestion: use correct adverb form or noun phrase.'

× Some people like me feel make a list take a lot of time and not effectively.

✓ Some people like me feel that making a list takes a lot of time and is not effective.

Missing 'that' and gerund 'making' needed. 'Takes' must agree with singular noun 'making a list'. 'Not effective' needs 'is' to be a clause. Suggestion: use 'that' for reported feelings, gerund for actions, and match verb number.'

× Some people like me feel make a list take a lot of time and not effectively.

✓ Some people like me feel that making a list takes a lot of time and is not effective.

Also 'effectively' (adverb) was incorrectly used; need adjective 'effective' after 'is'. Use preposition/connector 'that' and gerund form.'

× Moreover, maybe they never complete a full lead and doesn't like control it.

✓ Moreover, maybe they never complete a full list and don't like to control it.

'Doesn't' is third person singular; with 'they' use 'don't'. 'Lead' is incorrect word; use 'list'. Also 'control it' should be 'to control it' or 'being controlled'. Suggestion: ensure pronoun-verb agreement and correct noun choice.'

× Moreover, maybe they never complete a full lead and doesn't like control it.

✓ Moreover, maybe they never complete a full list and don't like to control it.

'Doesn't' mismatches plural subject 'they'; use 'don't'. Ensure verb forms match subjects.'

× Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone is more convenient because I can take my phone everything and I can easy to check a list.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient: I carry my phone everywhere and I can easily check the list.

Run-on and incorrect clauses. Need 'because it is' to link reason. 'Take my phone everything' should be 'carry my phone everywhere'. 'Easy' should be adverb 'easily'. Suggestion: break into clear clauses and use correct adverb forms.'

× Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone is more convenient because I can take my phone everything and I can easy to check a list.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient: I carry my phone everywhere and I can easily check the list.

Use adverb 'easily' to modify 'check'. 'Convenient' describes noun via 'it is'. Ensure adjectives/adverbs used correctly.'

× Moreover, my phones have diversity have to make lists.

✓ Moreover, my phone has various features for making lists.

'Phones' should be singular 'phone' if referring to personal device. 'Have diversity have to make lists' is ungrammatical; use 'has various features for making lists'. Suggestion: use correct noun number and clearer phrase.