Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam belirsizlikleri var. Daha doğal ve etkili bir yanıt vermek için doğrudan soruya cevap verin ve gereksiz tekrarları önleyin. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha açık ve anlaşılır hale getirmek için basit ve doğru yapılar kullanın.

예시: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer studying at home. However, sometimes I visit the library when I need quiet space or specific books.

제안: Cevabınızda anlam karışıklığı ve dilbilgisi hataları mevcut. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayın ve destekleyici detayları açık ve mantıklı bir şekilde bağlayıcı ifadelerle sunun. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha akıcı ve anlaşılır yapmak için basit ve doğru kelimeler kullanın.

예시: Usually, I read books or study quietly in the library. I also find it motivating to observe other people studying because it encourages me to focus.

제안: Cevabınızda zaman uyumu ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Geçmiş zaman kullanırken doğru fiil çekimlerine dikkat edin. Ayrıca, cevabınızı daha doğal ve etkili yapmak için nedenlerinizi açıkça belirtin ve cümlelerinizi mantıklı bir şekilde bağlayın.

예시: When I was a kid, my parents wanted to take me to the library once, but I cried because I didn't like it, so we didn't go.

제안: Cevabınızda tekrarlar ve belirsizlikler var. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayın ve gerekirse tahminlerinizi mantıklı bir şekilde ifade edin. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha akıcı ve doğal yapmak için uygun bağlaçlar kullanın.

예시: I'm not sure because I haven't met many Chinese kids or parents. However, I think many Chinese children probably visit libraries regularly for studying.

× I don't like to libraries.

✓ I don't like libraries.

The verb 'like' is not followed by the preposition 'to' when referring to liking something in general. The correct form is 'like libraries' without 'to'.

× I don't like to write things.

✓ I don't like writing things.

After 'like', when expressing a general preference, the gerund form (verb + -ing) is used instead of the infinitive with 'to'. So, 'like writing' is correct.

× Reading books or texts, doing texts I'm sorry and I don't I like to looking studying people's they are motivates me.

✓ I read books or texts, do exercises. I'm sorry, I don't like looking at or studying people; they motivate me.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. It mixes phrases without clear subjects or verbs. The correction provides complete sentences with proper subjects and verbs, improving clarity and grammar.

× My parents wants to go there once with me but I cried and I don't like it so we didn't.

✓ My parents wanted to go there once with me, but I cried and I didn't like it, so we didn't go.

The verb 'wants' should be 'wanted' to agree with the plural subject 'parents' and past tense context. Also, 'we didn't' is incomplete; it should be 'we didn't go' to complete the meaning.

× I never meet a Chinese kid or I never meet a Chinese parent.

✓ I have never met a Chinese kid or a Chinese parent.

The present simple 'meet' is incorrect here because the speaker refers to past experiences. The present perfect 'have never met' is appropriate to express this.