Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. "I have friends to go" gibi ifadeler yerine, doğrudan ve net cümleler kurmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümleniz biraz dağınık ve tekrarlayıcı. Daha kısa ve etkili cümleler kurmaya çalışın.

예시: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer studying at home with my kittens. However, some of my friends like to study there because they enjoy the quiet environment.

제안: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam bozuklukları var. "I like to sing studying peoples" ifadesi yanlış ve anlaşılması zor. Daha açık ve doğru cümleler kurmalısınız. Ayrıca, bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlenizi daha akıcı yapabilirsiniz.

예시: I usually study or read books in the library. I find it motivating to see other people studying because it encourages me to focus more.

제안: Cevabınız doğrudan soruya yanıt vermiyor ve biraz dolambaçlı. Daha net ve kısa cevaplar vermeye çalışın. Ayrıca, geçmiş zaman ifadelerini doğru kullanmalısınız.

예시: I don't really remember going to the library when I was a kid. I might ask my parents to be sure.

제안: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı hataları var. "Very want to study more" ve "need to go library" ifadeleri yanlış. Ayrıca, varsayımlardan kaçınarak daha genel ve doğru ifadeler kullanmalısınız.

예시: Although I haven't met many Chinese children, I think many of them visit libraries often because they value education highly.

× Actually, no, because I'd rather be at home and studying with my kittens.

✓ Actually, no, because I'd rather be at home studying with my kittens.

The phrase 'be at home and studying' is incorrect because 'rather be at home studying' is the correct form. The verb 'be' is followed directly by the present participle 'studying' without 'and'.

× But I have friends to go.

✓ But I have friends who go.

The phrase 'friends to go' is incorrect. The correct relative clause is 'friends who go' to indicate friends that go somewhere.

× Uh, I have friends like to go to the library and studying here, but no, I actually don't like to quite space.

✓ Uh, I have friends who like to go to the library and study here, but no, I actually don't like quiet spaces.

The phrase 'friends like to go' needs a relative pronoun 'who'. Also, 'and studying' should be parallel with 'like to go', so 'and study' is correct. 'Quite space' is incorrect; it should be 'quiet spaces'.

× I actually don't like to quite space.

✓ I actually don't like quiet spaces.

The word 'quite' is an adverb meaning 'very', but the intended adjective is 'quiet' meaning 'silent'. Also, 'space' should be plural 'spaces' to match the context.

× Studying or reading books actually and I like to sing studying peoples because when they are study I want to study more and it motivates me so much.

✓ Actually, I study or read books, and I like studying with people because when they study, I want to study more, and it motivates me a lot.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and incorrect verb forms. 'I like to sing studying peoples' is incorrect; it should be 'I like studying with people'. 'When they are study' should be 'when they study'. Also, 'motivates me so much' is better as 'motivates me a lot'.

× I don't remember actually because I don't remember my childhood too much, but I never asked my parents.

✓ I don't remember actually because I don't remember my childhood very well, but I have never asked my parents.

The phrase 'never asked' should be present perfect 'have never asked' to indicate an action that has not happened up to now. 'Too much' is better expressed as 'very well' when referring to memory.

× I need to ask them before I answered it.

✓ I need to ask them before I answer it.

The phrase 'before I answered it' is incorrect because the main verb is in present tense 'need', so the subordinate clause should be in present tense 'answer'.

× I think they need to go library very often.

✓ I think they need to go to the library very often.

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before a place. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' here.

× I think they need to go library very often.

✓ I think they need to go to the library very often.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.